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My generation believes that we are free. Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want sth. Free to free us from our past and our suffers, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live. Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our believes. There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help to improve whatever you want. For example your work-life balance, your nervsystem, your feeling about how whole your soul is, your connection to god, your partnership, your parentship, your happiness, your bodymovement, your sportbehaviour, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership. I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements. I am frightened about all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change it. All our actions have results and we are partly responsible about these results. And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us. I am grumpy today. I am disappointed about us humans, especially us so called ,,first world countries''. Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves on the first place, still not making enough amends. I want us humans to be more peaceful and gentle, more social, more attentive and respectful to our planet, and more humble. I am disappointed about myself too, but the details about the reasons I spare out for to protect my anonymity. I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lifes. I am not asking for stoppage. Learning is nice. But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living expensive on the shoulders of others and I am against achieving for to feel or be valuable. Complaining is easy maybe. But after complaining I will maybe find another behaviour.
Freedom
My generation believes that we are free.
Gen-Z?
Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want sthomething.
Always write in full except when you're chatting with a very close friend.
Free to free uourselves from our past and our sufferings, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live.
Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our believefs.
There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help to improve whatever you want.
For example: your work-life balance, your nervous system, your feeling aboutsense of how whole your soul is, your connection to gGod, your partnership, your parentship, your happiness, your body movement, your sports behaviour, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership.
It is always "God" when singular, but when plural, it is written as "gods".
I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements.
I don't understand this statement.
I am frightened aboutof all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change it.
I don't understand this either.
All our actions have results, and we are partly responsible about these resultsfor them.
And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us.
I am grumpy today.
I am disappointed about usin humans, especially us, so -called ,,"first world countries''".
Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves oin the first place, still not making enough amends.
I want us humans to be more peaceful and gentle, more social, more attentive and respectful to our planet, and more humble.
I am disappointed aboutin myself, too, but the details about the reasons I spare out forI won't explain why to protect my anonymity.
I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it's just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lifthe high standards we have for ourselves.
Learning is nice.
But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living expensive on the shoulders of othersliving expensively to show off, and I am against achieving for to feel or be valuable.
Complaining is easy maybe.
But after complaining I will maybe find another, maybe I should adopt a new behaviour.
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My generation believes that we are free. My generation believes that we are free. Gen-Z? |
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Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want sth. Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want s Always write in full except when you're chatting with a very close friend. |
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Free to free us from our past and our suffers, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live. Free to free |
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Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our believes. Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our belie |
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There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help to improve whatever you want. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For example your work-life balance, your nervsystem, your feeling about how whole your soul is, your connection to god, your partnership, your parentship, your happiness, your bodymovement, your sportbehaviour, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership. For example: your work-life balance, your nervous system, your It is always "God" when singular, but when plural, it is written as "gods". |
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I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements. I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements. I don't understand this statement. |
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I am frightened about all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change it. I am frightened I don't understand this either. |
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All our actions have results and we are partly responsible about these results. All our actions have results, and we are partly responsible |
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And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us. And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us. |
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I am grumpy today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am disappointed about us humans, especially us so called ,,first world countries''. I am disappointed |
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Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves on the first place, still not making enough amends. Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves |
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I want us humans to be more peaceful and gentle, more social, more attentive and respectful to our planet, and more humble. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am disappointed about myself too, but the details about the reasons I spare out for to protect my anonymity. I am disappointed |
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I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lifes. I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it's just |
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I am not asking for stoppage. |
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Learning is nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living expensive on the shoulders of others and I am against achieving for to feel or be valuable. But I am against real competition and perfectionism, |
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Complaining is easy maybe. Complaining is easy |
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But after complaining I will maybe find another behaviour. But after complaining |
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