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March 11, 2026

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Freedom

My generation believes that we are free. Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want sth. Free to free us from our past and our suffers, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live. Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our believes. There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help to improve whatever you want. For example your work-life balance, your nervsystem, your feeling about how whole your soul is, your connection to god, your partnership, your parentship, your happiness, your bodymovement, your sportbehaviour, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership. I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements. I am frightened about all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change it. All our actions have results and we are partly responsible about these results. And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us. I am grumpy today. I am disappointed about us humans, especially us so called ,,first world countries''. Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves on the first place, still not making enough amends. I want us humans to be more peaceful and gentle, more social, more attentive and respectful to our planet, and more humble. I am disappointed about myself too, but the details about the reasons I spare out for to protect my anonymity. I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lifes. I am not asking for stoppage. Learning is nice. But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living expensive on the shoulders of others and I am against achieving for to feel or be valuable. Complaining is easy maybe. But after complaining I will maybe find another behaviour.

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Freedom

My generation believes that we are free.

I am grumpy today.

I want us humans to be more peaceful and gentle, more social, more attentive and respectful to our planet, and more humble.

Learning is nice.

Complaining is easy maybe.

Freedom

There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help to improve whatever you want.

I am grumpy today.

I want us humans to be more peaceful and gentle, more social, more attentive and respectful to our planet, and more humble.

Learning is nice.

Freedom


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My generation believes that we are free.


My generation believes that we are free. My generation believes that we are free.

Gen-Z?

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Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want sth.


Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want sthomething. Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want something.

Always write in full except when you're chatting with a very close friend.

Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want sthomething. Free in our mind, free about our decisions, free in getting what we want, if we really want something.

"sth" looks especially out of place in this kind of writing

Free to free us from our past and our suffers, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live.


Free to free uourselves from our past and our sufferings, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live. Free to free ourselves from our past and our sufferings, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live.

Free to free uourselves from our past and our suffersing, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live. Free to free ourselves from our past and our suffering, free to travel and live where we want and free to choose how we want to live.

you can say "suffering" or "sufferings," either is fine, "sufferings" emphasizes there are different kinds of suffering from different sources

Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our believes.


Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our believefs. Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our beliefs.

Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our believefs. Free to choose our friends and partners, our work and our beliefs.

There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help to improve whatever you want.


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There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help toyou improve whatever you want. There are coaches for everything nowadays, who help you improve whatever you want.

For example your work-life balance, your nervsystem, your feeling about how whole your soul is, your connection to god, your partnership, your parentship, your happiness, your bodymovement, your sportbehaviour, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership.


For example: your work-life balance, your nervous system, your feeling aboutsense of how whole your soul is, your connection to gGod, your partnership, your parentship, your happiness, your body movement, your sports behaviour, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership. For example: your work-life balance, your nervous system, your sense of how whole your soul is, your connection to God, your partnership, your parentship, your happiness, your body movement, your sports behaviour, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership.

It is always "God" when singular, but when plural, it is written as "gods".

For example your work-life balance, your nervous system, your feelings about how whole your soul is, your connection to god, your partnership, your parentshiping, your happiness, your bodymovementflexibility, your sportbehavioursmanship, your voice, your language, your stuff, your business, your leadership. For example your work-life balance, your nervous system, your feelings about how whole your soul is, your connection to god, your partnership, your parenting, your happiness, your flexibility, your sportsmanship, your voice, your language, your business, your leadership.

Idk why but we only ever use the plural "feelings" when talking about our emotions in general Wasn't quite sure what "bodymovement" was supposed to be "your stuff" is extremely vague (I have no idea what you meant), which makes it weird to include in the middle of a long list of highly specific things

I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements.


I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements. I feel we are very weird next to all these improvements.

I don't understand this statement.

I feel we are very weird next tounnatural with all these improvements. I feel we are very unnatural with all these improvements.

I can't quite tell what you're getting at in the original, hopefully I understood

I am frightened about all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change it.


I am frightened aboutof all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change it. I am frightened of all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change it.

I don't understand this either.

I am frightened aboutof all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt about suffering if you can change itsurrounding suffering that can be relieved. I am frightened of all this empowerment, about the wish for perfection and the guilt surrounding suffering that can be relieved.

I can't tell if you're talking about relieving one's own suffering or the suffering of others

All our actions have results and we are partly responsible about these results.


All our actions have results, and we are partly responsible about these resultsfor them. All our actions have results, and we are partly responsible for them.

All our actions have results and we are partly responsible aboutfor these results. All our actions have results and we are partly responsible for these results.

And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us.


And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us. And even if there is knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation which goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us.

And even if there isare knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation whichthat goes along with this big wave which is rolling over us. And even if there are knowledge, respect and attentiveness in some of these coachings, I am still frightened about the eagerness and the exaltation that goes along with this big wave rolling over us.

I am grumpy today.


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I am disappointed about us humans, especially us so called ,,first world countries''.


I am disappointed about usin humans, especially us, so -called ,,"first world countries''". I am disappointed in humans, especially us, so-called "first world countries".

I am disappointed aboutin us humans, especially usour so called ,,"first world countries''." I am disappointed in us humans, especially our so called "first world countries."

Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves on the first place, still not making enough amends.


Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves oin the first place, still not making enough amends. Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves in the first place, still not making enough amends.

Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves on thein first place, still not making enough amends. Still creating wars, still worried about their power, still trying to grow, still putting themselves in first place, still not making enough amends.

I want us humans to be more peaceful and gentle, more social, more attentive and respectful to our planet, and more humble.


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I am disappointed about myself too, but the details about the reasons I spare out for to protect my anonymity.


I am disappointed aboutin myself, too, but the details about the reasons I spare out forI won't explain why to protect my anonymity. I am disappointed in myself, too, but I won't explain why to protect my anonymity.

I am disappointed aboutin myself too, but the details abI will spare yout the reasons I spare out fordetails to protect my anonymity. I am disappointed in myself too, but I will spare you the details to protect my anonymity.

I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lifes.


I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it's just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lifthe high standards we have for ourselves. I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it's just the high standards we have for ourselves.

I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lifves. I wonder if you would judge me as I do, or if it just goes along with our high requirements for what we and others should achieve in our and their lives.

I am not asking for stoppage.


I am not asking for it to stoppage. I am not asking for it to stop.

Learning is nice.


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But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living expensive on the shoulders of others and I am against achieving for to feel or be valuable.


But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living expensive on the shoulders of othersliving expensively to show off, and I am against achieving for to feel or be valuable. But I am against real competition and perfectionism, living expensively to show off, and I am against achieving to feel valuable.

But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living expensivehigh on the shoulders of others and I am against achieving forstriving to feel or be valuabled. But I am against real competition and perfectionism, about showing-off, about living high on the shoulders of others and I am against striving to feel or be valued.

"achieving" requires a direct object, you also can't use "for" with it. You can however use "for" with "achievement" ie. "I am against working towards achievements solely for the purpose of feeling or becoming valued."

Complaining is easy maybe.


Complaining is easy maybe. Complaining is easy.

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But after complaining I will maybe find another behaviour.


But after complaining I will maybe find another, maybe I should adopt a new behaviour. But after complaining, maybe I should adopt a new behaviour.

But after complaining maybe I will maybe find another behaviourfind something else to do. But after complaining maybe I will find something else to do.

or maybe "I'll find myself in a different mood."

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