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Acky

March 27, 2021

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Plastic Currency

Last past Sunday an Australian language exchange partner showed an Australian plastic currency, which somewhat surprised me. There is no doubt that there should be existing the plastic currency such as an Australian money or others. I guess that I have fixed thinking about the currency like the currency should be the paper. When I took a look at the plastic currency at first, it's beautiful and really cool. Given that they may be used in Japan, as there are so many vending machines in Japan, I'm worried about the security. I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security. It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the plastic currency's security at all.

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Plastic Currency

Given that they may be used in Japan, as there are so many vending machines in Japan, I'm worried about the security.

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nihongolearner19

March 27, 2021

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Plastic Currency


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Last past Sunday an Australian language exchange partner showed an Australian plastic currency, which somewhat surprised me.


Last past Sunday an Australian language exchange partner showed me an Australian plastic currency, which somewhat surprised me. Last Sunday an Australian language exchange partner showed me an Australian plastic currency, which somewhat surprised me.

You don't need both last and past; additionally past sounds much more natural. Also, adding "me" after "showed" makes it complete, as you need a subject.

There is no doubt that there should be existing the plastic currency such as an Australian money or others.


There is no doubt that there should be existing the plastic currency existing such as an Australian money or other currencies. There is no doubt that there should be plastic currency existing such as Australian money or other currencies.

I guess that I have fixed thinking about the currency like the currency should be the paper.


I guess that I have fixed thinking about the currency, like the currencyat it should be the paper. I guess that I have fixed thinking about currency, like that it should be paper.

You don't need articles if you're talking about currency in general. Also, adding a comma after your first clause makes the sentence easier to understand.

When I took a look at the plastic currency at first, it's beautiful and really cool.


When I took a look at the plastic currency at first, it's was beautiful and really cool. When I took a look at the plastic currency at first, it was beautiful and really cool.

You want to keep your tenses consistent here, as they're both past actions/events.

Given that they may be used in Japan, as there are so many vending machines in Japan, I'm worried about the security.


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I'm not sure but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security.


It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I 'm not sure of the


plastic currency 's security at all.


I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security.


I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of the security. I'm not sure, but I guess we had better use the paper currency rather than the plastic currency in aspects of security.

Again, you don't need to use "the" in front of every noun or it sounds off, as you're talking about a general concept. :)

It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the


plastic currency 's security at all.


It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the


It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the


It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much easier than paper currency, although I'm not sure of the plastic currency's security at all.


It seems to me that the plastic currency can be forged much more easierly than paper currency, although I'm not sure ofat all sure about the plastic currency's security at all. It seems to me that plastic currency can be forged much more easily than paper currency, although I'm not at all sure about the plastic currency's security.

It sounds more natural if you put phrases like "at all" in front of the noun you're modifying.

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