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The Corn Chips Fritos (110)

I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago. It was a Christmas gift.

There were three picture books, a body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

Since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

There were also a can of bean dip and a can of jarapeno cheddar dip in it.

At first, I just tried Fritos as it is, and then I tried it with bean dip.

I loved the chips, but bean dip wasn't my favorite.

However, it's not something that I can't eat.

I'll probably eat all of it. It might be an acquired taste.


二日前、アメリカの友達から荷物を受け取りました。それは、クリスマスギフトでした。

箱の中には、本が三冊、ボディクリーム、そしてたくさんのスナック菓子が入っていました。

実は、事前に「フリトース」というお菓子を送ってほしいと頼んでありました。

Kevin's English Roomのユーチューブで彼らがフリト―スを食べているのを見て以来、ずーっと食べたかったんです。

箱の中のフリト―スを見たとき、めっちゃテンション上がりました。(ワクワクしました)

ビーンディップと、ハラペーニョチェダーディップも一緒に入っていました。

まず最初に、フリト―スだけでそのまま食べてみて、それからビーンディップと一緒に食べてみました。

チップスは、とても美味しかったんですが、ビーンズディップは、すごく美味しいわけじゃなかったです。

でも、食べられないほどまずいわけじゃないです。

多分、全部食べると思います。だんだん好きになる味かも。

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The Corn Chips Fritos

I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago.

It was a Christmas gift.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

I'll probably eat all of it.

It might be an acquired taste.

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The Corn Chips Fritos

I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago.

It was a Christmas gift.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

There were also a can of bean dip and a can of jarapeno cheddar dip in it.

However, it's not something that I can't eat.

I'll probably eat all of it.

It might be an acquired taste.

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There were also a can of bean dip and a can of jarapeno cheddar dip in it.


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There wereas also a can of bean dip and a can of jarlapeno cheddarese dip in it. There was also a can of bean dip and a can of jalapeno cheese dip in it.

Cheddar is correct but I think cheese sounds better.

There wereas also a can of bean dip and a can of jarlapeno cheddar dip in it. There was also a can of bean dip and a can of jalapeno cheddar dip in it.

At first, I just tried Fritos as it is, and then I tried it with bean dip.


At first, I just tried Fritos as it is, and then I tried it with bean dip. At first, I just tried Fritos as is, and then I tried it with bean dip.

At first, I just tried the Fritos as it isthey are, and then I tried ithem with bean dip. At first, I just tried the Fritos as they are, and then I tried them with bean dip.

At first, I just tried the Fritos as it ison their own, and then I tried ithem with the bean dip. At first, I just tried the Fritos on their own, and then I tried them with the bean dip.

I loved the chips, but bean dip wasn't my favorite.


I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite. I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite.

you're very diplomatic

I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite. I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite.

However, it's not something that I can't eat.


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However, it's not something that I cawon't eat. However, it's not something that I won't eat.

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However, it's not something that I cawon't eat. However, it's not something that I won't eat.

I'll probably eat all of it.


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It might be an acquired taste.


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I loved the chips, but bean dip isn't my favorite.


There were also bean dip and jarapeno cheddar dip in it.


Actually, I've told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.


Since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.


SEver since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it. Ever since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've wanted to try it.

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SEver since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" YouTube channel video where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it. Ever since I watched the "Kevin's English Room" YouTube channel video where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.


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I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box. I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

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The Corn Chips Fritos (110)


I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago.


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It was a Christmas gift.


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There were three picture books, a body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it.


There were three picture books, a body moisturizerlotion, and lots of snacks in it. There were three picture books, body lotion, and lots of snacks in it.

There were three picture books, a body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it. There were three picture books, body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.


Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand. Actually, I had told my friend to send me chips called Fritos beforehand.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand. Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

"Additionally" fits better here than "Actually"

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand. Actually, I had told my friend to send me chips called Fritos beforehand.

The Corn Chips Fritos


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