One of my friends told me, "T that there iwas a song Ishe wanted to play". So, I went to her house the other day. One of my friends told me that there was a song she wanted to play. So, I went to her house the other day.

Sometimes, we'll paraphrase quotes using "that", in this manner.

One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play", so I went to her house the other day. One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play", so I went to her house the other day.

One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play" when I went to her house the other day. One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play" when I went to her house the other day.

OThe other day one of my friends told me, "Tthere is a song I want to play", so I went to her house the other day. The other day one of my friends told me "there is a song I want to play", so I went to her house.

Quotes used in the middle of a sentence like this don't keep their capitalized letter! "One of my friends told me, 'There is a song I want to play' " | "I went to her house the other day." feels a little disconnected. Putting "the other day" at the beginning sets the context for your conversation and flows into the "X occurred, so I did Y".

One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play", so I went to her house the other day. One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play", so I went to her house the other day.

ThatIt was title isd "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo". It was titled "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo".

Thate title is "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo". The title is "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo".

That title ise song is called "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo". (Farewell, Siberian Railroad) The song is called "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo". (Farewell, Siberian Railroad)

It seems that It seems that

It seemsApparently, Apparently,

Iit came up in her recommended whilen she was watching YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it. it came up in her recommended while she was watching YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it.

Iit came up in her recommended when she was watching something on YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it. it came up in her recommended when she was watching something on YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it.

It came up in her recommendedations when she was watching YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it. It came up in her recommendations when she was watching YouTube and as soon as she heard it, she loved it.

Iit came up in her recommended videos when she was watching YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it. it came up in her recommended videos when she was watching YouTube and as soon as she heard it, she loved it.

Saying "it came up in her recommended" is technically a little awkward in writing, BUT if I were messaging or chatting with friends I would probably also say "it came up in my recommended". This next correction can be a little tricky. The technical rule for using a comma ( , ) before "and" is that if you are connecting to independent clauses, you should put a comma before it. However the "she" and "heard it" part of your sentence is a clear continuation of your previous thought. So since this section of your sentence isn't really independent, you don't need the ( , ). This is a little overly technical, but you're English writing is pretty good so I think you can handle it 👍

Iit came up in her recommended whenations while she was watching YouTube, and as soon as shefter hearding it, she loved it. it came up in her recommendations while she was watching YouTube, and after hearing it, she loved it.

This song gave me a unique feeling, and I've never heard another song like it. This song gave me a unique feeling, and I've never heard another song like it.

You could also say "special" instead of "unique". "Unique" just means new and different, but "special" means unique in a very positive way.

This song gave me a unique feeling and I've never heard another song like it. This song gave me a unique feeling and I've never heard another song like it.

Sentence is correct, but another way to say it could be "... and I've never heard anything like it".

It feels sorrowful, this song, and itI can feel the feeling of moving fast as well. It feels sorrowful, this song, and I can feel the feeling of moving fast as well.

It feels sorrowful this song and it feel the, and it gives off a feeling of moving fast as well. It feels sorrowful, and it gives off a feeling of moving fast as well.

or "it conveys a feeling of moving fast as well"

It feels sorrowful this song and it feel, yet it has the feeling of moving fast as well. It feels sorrowful, yet it has the feeling of moving fast as well.

It feels sorrowfulSorrow resonates through thise song and it feel, but it also gave the feeling of moving fast as well. Sorrow resonates through the song, but it also gave the feeling of moving fast as well.

"Sorrowful" is used correctly hear, but I don't usually hear/read it used this way often. "It feels sorrowful, this song" feels a little bit like old English, like if you were narrating a book that took place long ago. Here, "it feel the feeling" isn't correct. For "feelings", something can "give" you feelings or something can "make" you "feel", but "feel the feeling" sounds a little odd.

It feels sorrowful this song and it feel the feeling of moving fast as wellhas a sense of sorrow but also a sense of speed. It has a sense of sorrow but also a sense of speed.

I was able to practice aloneg with the original song because the chords were easy and in the original key. I was able to practice along with the original song because the chords were easy and in the original key.

The tempo was very fast when saung awith guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song. The tempo was very fast when sung with guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song.

"Sing" is an irregular verb that has different forms, similar to do/did/done. I sing, I sang, the song was sung.

The tempo was very fast when sang awhile playing the guitar, andso we really enjoyed singing the song. The tempo was very fast when sang while playing the guitar, so we really enjoyed singing the song.

The tempo was very fast when sang a guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song. The tempo was very fast when sang a guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song.

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The tempo was very fast when saung awith guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song. The tempo was very fast when sung with guitar and we really enjoyed singing the song.

The tempo was very fast when we sang awhile playing the guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the songit. The tempo was very fast when we sang while playing the guitar, and we really enjoyed it.

Please try listening to it if you'd like. Please listen to it if you'd like.

Original is fine, but this feels a little more natural to me.

Please try listening to it if you likget a chance. Please try listening to it if you get a chance.