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Old Songs, New Feelings
One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play" I went to her house the other day.
That title is "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo".
It's quite an old song.
It seems It came up in her recommended when she was watching YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it.
This song gave me a unique feeling and I've never heard another song like it.
It feels sorrowful this song and it feel the feeling of moving fast as well.
I was able to practice alone with the original song because the chords were easy and in the original key.
The tempo was very fast when sang a guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song.
Please try listening to it if you like.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2eOR2proWaY
古い歌、新しい感情
先日、友人が「弾きたい曲があるのよ」と言っていたので、友人の家に行きました。
そのタイトルは「さらばシベリア鉄道」で、かなり昔の曲です。
YouTubeを見ていたらお勧め動画に上がっていたらしく、すぐに気に入ったと言っていました。
私も聞いてみたら、独特の感じがするというか、他の曲で同じような曲を聞いたことがないと思いました。
哀愁感がありますが、疾走感もあります。
弾きやすいコードで原曲キーだったので原曲に合わせて練習することが出来ました。
弾き語りをすると、テンポが速く、二人ともノリノリで歌っていました。
良かったら聞いてみてください。
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2eOR2proWaY
Old Songs, New Feelings
One of my friends told me, "There is a song I want to play", so I went to her house the other day.
That title is "Saraba Siberia Tetsudo".
It's quite an old song.
It seems that
Iit came up in her recommended when she was watching something on YouTube, and as soon as she heard it, she loved it.
This song gave me a unique feeling and I've never heard another song like it.
It feels sorrowful this song and it feel the, and it gives off a feeling of moving fast as well.
or "it conveys a feeling of moving fast as well"
I was able to practice alone with the original song because the chords were easy and in the original key.
The tempo was very fast when sang awhile playing the guitar, andso we really enjoyed singing the song.
Please try listening to it if you like.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2eOR2proWaY
Feedback
Well done! It's an interesting song. It makes me imagine horses galloping in the snow.
Old Songs, New Feelings
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It's quite an old song.
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This song gave me a unique feeling, and I've never heard another song like it.
You could also say "special" instead of "unique". "Unique" just means new and different, but "special" means unique in a very positive way.
It feels sorrowful, this song, and itI can feel the feeling of moving fast as well.
I was able to practice alone with the original song because the chords were easy and in the original key.
The tempo was very fast when saung awith guitar, and we really enjoyed singing the song.
"Sing" is an irregular verb that has different forms, similar to do/did/done. I sing, I sang, the song was sung.
Please try listening to it if you'd like.
Original is fine, but this feels a little more natural to me.
Feedback
Overall, well written. And a very beautiful song, as well!
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