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Abigail

June 14, 2025

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Violencia en las calles del Perú

When I go out of my house and I go to my english class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing even killing them, and I'm afraid of that happend to me. I have to go to my classes with my mom, because she's afraid to that happen to me. Dina Boluarte who is the president from Perú, doesn't do anything about it. A lot of people have died trying to fend, some cases they kill them for not have nothing to steal from them. I would like that this situation improve for the people's safe


Cuando salgo de mi casa y me dirijo a mis clases de inglés, la mayoría de las veces yo he visto personas peleando, robando incluso matándose, y tengo miedo de que me pase a mi. Yo tengo que ir a mis clases con mi mamá porque ella teme a que me pase algo. Dina Boluarte, que es la presidenta del perú, no hace nada al respecto. Muchas personas han muerto por tratar de defenderse, en algunos casos los matan por no tener nada que robarles. Me gustaría que esta situación mejore por el bienestar de todos.

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Violencia en las calles del Perú

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Abigail

June 15, 2025

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I would like that this situation improve for the people's safe


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Violencia en las calles del Perú


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When I go out of my house and I go to my english class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing even killing them, and I'm afraid of that happend to me.


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Dina Boluarte who is the president from Perú, doesn't do anything about it.


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A lot of people have died trying to fend, some cases they kill them for not have nothing to steal from them.


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When I go out of my house and y go to my english class, most of the time I have seen people fighting, stealing even killing them, and I'm afraid of that happend to me.


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