First partPart One. Part One.

There's nothing wrong with yours but this is a more common expression.

First part.Part One Part One

I agree with shorter.

ThaIt's an old movie from 1990, if I'm not wrong it is of 1990 (nineteen ninety). It's an old movie from 1990, if I'm not wrong.

ThaIt's an old movie, if I'm not wrong it is of 1990 (nineteen ninety) from 1990, if I remember correctly. It's an old movie from 1990, if I remember correctly.

It is featuring byes Robert De Niro, Ray Liotta, and Joe Pesci as the protagonists. It is features Robert De Niro, Ray Liotta, and Joe Pesci as the protagonists.

It is featuring byes Robert De Niro, Ray Liotta, and Joe Pesci as the protagonists. It features Robert De Niro, Ray Liotta, and Joe Pesci as the protagonists.

It begins with the littlea young Henry Hill, a son of an Italian couple, h. His father worked oin the postal service and his mother was a housewife. It begins with a young Henry Hill, a son of an Italian couple. His father worked in the postal service and his mother was a housewife.

I feel "young Henry Hill" is more natural.

As he grew ows, he starts to do works for some neighborhood's gangsters. As he grows, he starts to do work for some neighborhood gangsters.

As he grew ows up, he starts to do works for some neighborhood's gangsters. As he grows up, he starts to do work for some neighborhood gangsters.

"He starts doing work for.." also works

He wins them confidenceir trust and starts to be a close friend tof them ( gangsters). He wins their trust and starts to be a close friend to the gangsters.

He wins themir confidence and starts to be a close friend of them (gangsters)s with them. He wins their confidence and starts to be close friends with them.

I agree with shorter, I think "trust" is a better word to use here.

He doesn't wents anymore to school, every time that Henry gets was deposited ingo to school anymore, and devotes all his free time to his new job. He doesn't go to school anymore, and devotes all his free time to his new job.

He doesn't wents anymore to school, every time that Henry gets was deposited ingo to school anymore, and devotes all his free time to his new job. He doesn't go to school anymore, and devotes all his free time to his new job.

I think the phrase that shorter suggested is good. You can also use "dedicates" instead of "devotes".

Now, the 16 -years -old's Henry enjoyed tos steal someing cigarrettes and alcohol trucks with his newest friends. Now, the 16-years-old Henry enjoys stealing cigarettes and alcohol trucks with his new friends.

Now, the 16 years old's Henry enjoyed tos steal someing cigarrettes and alcohol trucks with his newest friends. Now, the 16 years old Henry enjoys stealing cigarettes and alcohol trucks with his new friends.

I'm actually not sure what an alcohol truck is? Do you mean a like a delivery truck transporting alcohol?

Everything is rosy,. Henry is a pretty and rich young man, h. He moves the gangster's' cars, the most expensive and newest cars. Everything is rosy. Henry is a pretty and rich young man. He moves the gangsters' cars, the most expensive and newest cars.

If it's more than one gangster, "gangsters" + possessive -> gangsters' (with the ' after the s)

Everything is rosy,. Henry is a pretty and rich young man, h. He moves the gangster's' cars, the most expensive and newest cars. Everything is rosy. Henry is a pretty and rich young man. He moves the gangsters' cars, the most expensive and newest cars.

I'm not sure what you mean by "moves the gangsters' cars". Do you mean "he gets the drive the gangsters' cars"?

EveryAll the girls atin neighborhood are falling in love with him. All the girls in neighborhood are falling in love with him.

EveryAll the girls atin the neighborhood are falling in love with him. All the girls in the neighborhood are falling in love with him.

Alternatively, "every girl in the neighborhood is falling in love with him".