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May 31, 2024

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I'm going to have a one-day travel to Suzhou City tomorrow.

My train ticket is around 9:30 and the train station is not far from my apartment, so I'll sleep in tomorrow morning and head out around 8:20. Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.

The distance from Shanghai to Suzhou is around 85 km, so I will reach Suzhou Station in 25 minutes.

The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.

Have a nice weekend!


我明天要去苏州一日游。

火车票在9:30左右,火车站离我家不远,所以明早我要睡个懒觉,8:20左右出发。然后有大约40分钟在车站办理进站手续——即使车站很忙,时间也够了。

从上海到苏州大约是85公里,所以我将在25分钟内到达苏州站。

回程的票是19:50,但我要花45分钟才能到火车站,这意味着我需要在18:30之前完成所有的事情。

祝大家周末愉快!

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One-day Trip

Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.

The distance from Shanghai to Suzhou is around 85 km, so I will reach Suzhou Station in 25 minutes.

Have a nice weekend!

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Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.

The distance from Shanghai to Suzhou is around 85 km, so I will reach Suzhou Station in 25 minutes.

The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.

Have a nice weekend!

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June 1, 2024

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Then I can have around 40 minutes to check in at the station -- it's long enough even if the station is busy.

The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.

Have a nice weekend!

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Tammy

May 31, 2024

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Have a nice weekend!

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Have a nice weekend!

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One-day Trip

Have a nice weekend!

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One-day Trip


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I'm going to have a one-day travel to Suzhou City tomorrow.


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“Travel” isn’t very often used as a countable noun, and “have a travel” sounds unnatural to my American ears. “Day trip” is an excellent suggestion: - I’m taking a day trip to Suzhou tomorrow. - I’m going on a day trip to Suzhou tomorrow. I don’t think it’s necessary to add “City” after Suzhou.

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Better to say trip instead of travel here. If you were to use travel as a noun, it would usually be "travels" (for example, "During my travels around the world, I have learnt many things.") But generally, "trip" would be the safer option. "Going on" would also be a better way to phrase this (as in "going on holidays")

My train ticket is around 9:30 and the train station is not far from my apartment, so I'll sleep in tomorrow morning and head out around 8:20.


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Your original is also OK, since the reader doesn’t have to think very hard to realize that, for a day trip, you’d be leaving at 9:30 in the morning, not at night.

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The distance from Shanghai to Suzhou is around 85 km, so I will reach Suzhou Station in 25 minutes.


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The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.


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The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need to spend 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30. The return ticket is at 19:50, but I need 45 minutes to get to the train station, which means I need to finish everything before 18:30.

The "to spend" just sounded a little weird and unnecessary to me.

Have a nice weekend!


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