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Why don't more people go vegetarian?

I’ve been a meat-eater all my life. I come from a family and culture that eats meats all the time.
It’s hard to believe that people can live their lives without consuming meat, especially red. However, since I moved to Chile, I have made a lot of vegetarian friends, and they have cooked some delicious meatless food for me. Maybe I would eat less meat, if I knew how cooking basics. Lately, I’ve been trying to find ways to reduce the amount of meat I consume. I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis, I am not used to it, and this is also a family thing. But so far I have been able to find some recipes that I really enjoy and find mouth-watering.
Moreover, there are many reasons meat consumption is problematic. It increases global carbon emissions, the risk of chronic diseases, and the chance of gaining weight. So when I stop for a moment to think about all the negative effects it can cause on my body and the environment, it makes me depressed. And these happen because we are not really aware of the consequences of our choices.
I don’t know if I will ever be a vegetarian, I find it really hard to accomplish that, but I definitely want to cut down on meat. I know it’s just a habit, a comfort zone, and that can be certainly changed.

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Lately, I’ve been trying to find ways to reduce the amount of meat I consume.

Moreover, there are many reasons meat consumption is problematic.

It increases global carbon emissions, the risk of chronic diseases, and the chance of gaining weight.

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jolishe

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Why don't more people go vegetarian?

I’ve been a meat-eater all my life.

It’s hard to believe that people can live their lives without consuming meat, especially red.

Lately, I’ve been trying to find ways to reduce the amount of meat I consume.

But so far I have been able to find some recipes that I really enjoy and find scrumptious.

Moreover, there are many reasons meat consumption is problematic.

It increases global carbon emissions, the risk of chronic diseases, and the chance of gaining weight.

I know it’s just a habit, a comfort zone, and it can be certainly changed.

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jolishe

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Why don't more people go vegetarian?


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In English the verbs, nouns, adjetives, pronouns, adverbs, etc., are all capitalized.

I’ve been a meat-eater all my life.


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I’ve been a meat-eater all my life. I’ve been a meat-eater all my life.

Another way to say "meat-eater" is "carnivore", although this is really only used in academic settings describing the dietary habits of animals. In casual conversation, "meat-eater" would be more common.

I come from a family that eats meats all the time and as human beings our diets are cultural.


I come from a family and culture that eats meats all the time and as human beings our diets are cultural. I come from a family and culture that eats meats all the time.

Not technically wrong, but "as human beings our diets are cultural" sounds pretty awkward. I think this retains the meaning and makes it sound more natural

I come from a family that eats meats all the time, and as human beings our diets aredepend on our culturale. I come from a family that eats meats all the time, and as human beings our diets depend on our culture.

It’s hard to believe that people can live their lives without consuming meat, especially red.


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It’s hard to believe that people can live their lives without consuming meat, especially red meat. It’s hard to believe that people can live their lives without consuming meat, especially red meat.

If you wanted to avoid being repetitive, you could say, "especially of the red variety" or "red kind" instead.

However, since I moved to Chile, I have made a lot of vegetarian friends, and they have cooked for me some delicious meatless food.


However, since I moved to Chile, I have made a lot of vegetarian friends, and they have cooked for me some delicious meatless food for me. However, since I moved to Chile, I have made a lot of vegetarian friends, and they have cooked some delicious meatless food for me.

Again not wrong but sounds more natural this way

However, since I moved to Chile, I have made a lot of vegetarian friends, and they have cooked for me some delicious meatless food. However, since I moved to Chile I have made a lot of vegetarian friends, and they have cooked for me some delicious meatless food.

"I have" is commonly written as "I've". "They have" is commonly written as "They've".

What makes me think that maybe I don’t eat less meat because I don’t know the kitchen basics.


What makes me think that mMaybe I don’twould eat less meat because I don’t know the kitchenif I knew cooking basics. Maybe I would eat less meat if I knew cooking basics.

The structure sounds a little weird when you start with a double negative ("don't eat less"), and "kitchen basics" is an odd term, though I understand what you mean

WhatThis makes me think that maybe I don’t eat lesseat more meat because I don’t know the kitchencooking basics. This makes me think that maybe I eat more meat because I don’t know cooking basics.

I feel like it's better to state why you do something instead of why you don't do something here.

Lately, I’ve been trying to find ways to reduce the amount of meat I consume.


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I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis, I am not used to it, and this is also cultural.


I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis,. I am not used to it, and this is also cultural. I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis. I am not used to it, and this is also cultural.

I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis, I am not used to it, and this is also cultural thing. I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis, I am not used to it, and this is also cultural thing.

"I am" can be written as "I'm".

But so far I have been able to find some recipes that I really enjoy and find scrumptious.


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But so far, I have been able to find some recipes that I really enjoy and find scrumptious. But so far, I have been able to find some recipes that I really enjoy and find scrumptious.

"I have" is commonly written as "I've". "Delicious" or "very good" might be used instead of "scrumptious" here.

Moreover, there are many reasons meat consumption is problematic.


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It increases global carbon emissions, the risk of chronic diseases, and the chance of gaining weight.


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So when I stop for a moment to think about all the negative effects it can cause on my body and on the environment it makes me depressed and that happens because we are not really aware of the consequences of our choices.


So when I stop for a moment to think about all the negative effects it can cause on my body and on the environment, it makes me depressed and that happens because w. We are not really aware of the consequences of our choices. So when I stop for a moment to think about all the negative effects it can cause on my body and on the environment, it makes me depressed. We are not really aware of the consequences of our choices.

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So when I stop for a moment to think about all the negative effects it can cause ton my body and on the environment, it makes me depressed and that. These things happens because we are not really aware of the consequences of our choices. So when I stop for a moment to think about all the negative effects it can cause to my body and the environment, it makes me depressed. These things happen because we are not really aware of the consequences of our choices.

"We are" is commonly written as "we're".

I don’t know if I will ever be a vegetarian, I find it really hard to accomplish that, but I definitely want to cut out on meat.


I don’t know if I will ever be a vegetarian, I find it really hard to accomplish that, but I definitely want to cut outdown on meat. I don’t know if I will ever be a vegetarian, I find it really hard to accomplish that, but I definitely want to cut down on meat.

"Cut out" would be an absolute (going vegetarian) "Cut down" would be reducing

I don’t know if I will ever be a vegetarian, I think I would find it really hard to accomplish that, but I definitely want to cucut some meat out onf my dieat. I don’t know if I will ever be a vegetarian, I think I would find it really hard to accomplish that, but I definitely want cut some meat out of my diet.

"I will" is commonly written as "I'm". You haven't started trying to become a vegetarian yet, (or at least from the material presented), so it should be conditional.

I know it’s just a habit, a comfort zone, and it can be certainly changed.


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I know it’s just a habit, a comfort zone, and that it can be certainly changed. I know it’s just a habit, a comfort zone, and that it can be certainly changed.

I don’t know if I will ever be a vegetarian, I find it really hard to accomplish that, but I definitely want to cut down on meat.


I come from a family and culture that eats meats all the time.


However, since I moved to Chile, I have made a lot of vegetarian friends, and they have cooked some delicious meatless food for me.


Maybe I would eat less meat, if I knew how cooking basics.


I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis, I am not used to it, and this is also a family .


So when I stop for a moment to think about all the negative effects it can cause on my body and the environment, it makes me depressed.


And these happen because we are not really aware of the consequences of our choices.


I know it’s just a habit, a comfort zone, and that can be certainly changed.


But so far I have been able to find some recipes that I really enjoy and find mouth-watering.


I am not a person who eats vegetables on a daily basis, I am not used to it, and this is also a family thing.


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