I was thinking about itsomething last night. I was thinking about something last night.

You need to specify what “it” is before you use it

I have biglots of issues with my clothes, because mywhere I lifve is half in cold weather, and other half in hothas both cold and warm weather. I have lots of issues with my clothes, because where I live has both cold and warm weather.

This sounds more natural

I have big issues with my clothes, becauseand it's because of half my life is halfbeing in cold weather, and other half in hot weatherhalf hot. I have big issues with my clothes, and it's because of half my life being in cold weather, half hot.

So, I always need to carry a big bag, and think about where I'm going to save clothes that I don't need at the moment. So, I always need to carry a big bag and think about where I'm going to save clothes that I don't need at the moment.

So, I always need to carry a big bag, and think about where I'm going to save clothes that I don't need at the moment can conserve clothes. So, I always need to carry a big bag, and think about where I can conserve clothes.

Taking this into account, I really would appreciatlike to have a portable closet, or a place when I can change my clothes like a The Sims character of The Sims, hahaha. Taking this into account, I really would like to have a portable closet, or a place when I can change my clothes like a The Sims character, hahaha.

The word “appreciate” sounds very odd here

It would be unbelievableamazing to have a portable device taller than a phone, that saves all my wardrobe entire digitalized. It would be amazing to have a portable device taller than a phone that saves my wardrobe entire digitalized.

1. The word “unbelievable” sounds kinda off here. A word like “awesome” or “amazing” would work better. 2. “All my wardrobe” sounds weird. When referring to objects like wardrobes, the word “entire” is used instead.

It would be unbelievable to have a portable device, especially one taller than a phone, that saves all mymy whole wardrobe digitalizedly. It would be unbelievable to have a portable device, especially one taller than a phone, that saves my whole wardrobe digitally.

I could bring it in my suitcase, open a mobile applicationclick an app, choose my outfit, and put it on the floor, and it would to project a hologram that changes my clothes instantly. I could bring it in my suitcase, click an app, choose my outfit, and put it on the floor to project a hologram that changes my clothes instantly.

I never noticed multiple nonrestrictive clauses used as a sequence like this lol but can work like this.

Then I'll never have to pack nor get worried aboutworry over the weather. Then I'll never have to pack nor worry over the weather.

Only withWith just a click, and it'’s ready:; new clothes, new style, new weather. With just a click, it’s ready; new clothes, new style, new weather.

“With just a click” sounds better than “only with a click” in this context

Only with a click, and it's ready: new clothes, new style, new weatherfunctionality. Only a click, and it's ready: new clothes, new style, new functionality.

I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, itexisted, it would not only solves clothesing problems... it would literally it would change the world! I know if something like this existed, it would not only solve clothing problems... it would literally change the world!

1. This sentence is a bit cluttered and confusing, and since we already know what you’re referring to, you can take out the description of this device 2. Since you’re describing a hypothetical scenario, you should use the conditional tense for the other verbs in this sentence

I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, it would not only solves clothesing problems... but literally it would change the world! I know if something like this would exist, a mobile device that materializes things in the air with solid holograms, it would not only solve clothing problems... but literally change the world!