The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus. The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine on Venus.

The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus. The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine on Venus.

The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus. The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine on Venus.

The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine aton Venus. The other day I read about the discovery of phosphine on Venus.

This could be proof that there is life ion Venus. This could be proof that there is life on Venus.

This could be proof that there is life in Venus.proves that there could be life there, This proves that there could be life there,

This could be proof that there is life ion Venus. This could be proof that there is life on Venus.

This could be proof that there is life ion Venus. This could be proof that there is life on Venus.

as Phosphine is one indicator of life existence. as Phosphine is one indicator of life existence.

Phosphine is one indicator of lifthe existence of life. Phosphine is one indicator of the existence of life.

You could also just delete this sentence, since it means the same thing as the previous one.

It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions. It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions.

It is known thatOn Earth, phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory withunder extreme conditions. On Earth, phosphine can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory under extreme conditions.

It's correct to say "it is known," but it sounds a little stiff and overly formal. The way I wrote it is more concise.

It is known thatOn Earth, phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganism or in a laboratory with extreme conditions. of high temperature and pressure. On Earth, phosphine can only be made by microorganism or in a laboratory with extreme conditions of high temperature and pressure.

It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions. It is known that phosphine on Earth can only be made by microorganisms or in a laboratory with extreme conditions.

These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, doesn't exist ion rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen ibe found on gas planets like Jupiter. These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, don't exist on rocky planets like Venus, but they can be found on gas planets like Jupiter.

Think "can be found" sounds more natural and is more correct than "can happen"

These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, doesn't exist iare not found on rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen ioccur on gas planets like Jupiter. These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, are not found on rocky planets like Venus, but they can occur on gas planets like Jupiter.

These extreme conditions, like high temperature and pressure, doesn' generally do not exist ion rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen in gas planets likeoccur on planets with abundant gas, such as Jupiter. These conditions generally do not exist on rocky planets like Venus, but they can occur on planets with abundant gas, such as Jupiter.

These extreme conditions, like high temperatures and pressure, doesn't exist in rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen in gas planets like Jupiter. These extreme conditions, like high temperatures and pressure, don't exist in rocky planets like Venus, but they can happen in gas planets like Jupiter.

Venus' surface is an extreme environment. Venus' surface is an extreme environment.

Technically you need the apostrophe after Venus (you could also write "Venus's"). Many native speakers get this wrong!

VenusThe surface of Venus is an extreme environment. The surface of Venus is an extreme environment.

You could also say "Venus's surface" or "Venus' surface" (technically, both are correct).

On Venus, the surface ihas an extreme environment. On Venus, the surface has an extreme environment.

Venus' surface is an extreme environment. Venus' surface is an extreme environment.

But, at 60 kman altitude, on top off 60 km, above the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different. But, at an altitude of 60 km, above the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different.

But, at 60 kman altitude of 60 kilometers, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different. But at an altitude of 60 kilometers, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different.

But, at 60 km altitude, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus,at an altitude of 60 km above ground, the environmental conditions are different. But, on top of the toxic clouds at an altitude of 60 km above ground, the environmental conditions are different.

But, at 60 km of altitude, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different. But, at 60 km of altitude, on top of the toxic clouds of Venus, the environmental conditions are different.

There, temperature varies between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravityational force is nearly the same as ion our planet, and it doesn't exist ththere isn't the same harsh environment there ias on the surface, so life could potentially liveexist there. The temperature varies between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravitational force is nearly the same as on our planet, and there isn't the same harsh environment as on the surface, so life could potentially exist there.

English speakers wouldn't really use "There" to introduce a sentence in the same way as some other languages - the reader will understand from the context of the previous sentence. The other adjustments make this read more naturally

There, temperature varies between 20ºC and 30ºC, and the gravityational force is nearly the same as ion our planet and it doesn't exist the harsh environment there is on the. The environment is not as harsh as that of Venus's surface, so lifthere could potentiallybe livfe there. The temperature varies between 20ºC and 30ºC and the gravitational force is nearly the same as on our planet. The environment is not as harsh as that of Venus's surface, so there could be life there.

I cut out "There," because it's already clear which place you're talking about. I broke the sentence into two parts because it was rather long. "Gravitational force" is the correct phrase. I understand what you mean by "life could potentially live there," but it just sounds a bit redundant/odd.

There, temperatures variesy between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravity force is nearly the same as ion our planet and it doesn't existhave the harsh environment there is onas the surface, so life could potentially liveexist there. There, temperatures vary between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravity force is nearly the same as on our planet and it doesn't have the harsh environment as the surface, so life could potentially exist there.

There, temperatures variesy between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravity force is nearly the same as that in our planet and it doesn't exist the harsh environment there isthere aren't the same harsh environmental conditions found on the surface, so life could potentially live there. There, temperatures vary between 20ºC and 30ºC, the gravity force is nearly the same as that in our planet and there aren't the same harsh environmental conditions found on the surface, so life could potentially live there.

Because phosphine is easily destroyed by acid rain, researchers statbelieve that something is renewgenerating it. Because phosphine is easily destroyed by acid rain, researchers believe that something is regenerating it.

You can renew an activity, a relationship, an action, a license, a subscription, or a contract. You can regenerate living matter (organs or tissue).

Because phosphine is easily destroyed by acid rain, researchers state that something is renewplenishing it. Because phosphine is easily destroyed by acid rain, researchers state that something is replenishing it.

The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us. The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us.

The only possible explanations are eithera microorganism or a newn unknown chemical process totally unknown to us. The only possible explanations are a microorganism or an unknown chemical process.

The only possible explanations are is either microorganisms are creating life or a new chemical process that is totally unknown to us. The only possible explanation is either microorganisms are creating life or a new chemical process that is totally unknown to us.

when you use either or, the verb remains singular.

The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us. The only possible explanations are either microorganisms or a new chemical process totally unknown to us.

In any case, it has beenthis is seen as a breakthrough amongwithin the scientifice community, and we will get out of doubtbecome certain in the next few years whenonce probes are sent there. In any case, this is seen as a breakthrough within the scientific community, and we will become certain in the next few years once probes are sent there.

I'm not 100% sure what you mean with the first part of the sentence - I've understood that this discovery is seen by scientists as a breakthrough (but other interpretations may be possible!). You can't really say "get out of doubt" - "become certain" or "learn more" work better

In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the science community, and we will get out of doubtlearn more in the next few years when probes are sent thereo Venus. In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the science community, and we will learn more in the next few years when probes are sent to Venus.

In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the scientifice community, and we will get out of doubt be able to confirm it within the next few years when probes are sentwe send probes there. In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the scientific community, and we will be able to confirm it within the next few years when we send probes there.

In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the science community, and we will getfind out of doubt in the next few years, when probes are sent there. In any case, it has been a breakthrough among the science community, and we will find out in the next few years, when probes are sent there.

Fortunately, Venus is not that far (for spacby the standards of space!) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on thein scope right now. Fortunately, Venus is not that far (by the standards of space!) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is in scope right now.

I interpreted the "space standards" comment as somewhat ironic so have added an exclamation mark - you don't need this but it adds a bit more excitement!

Fortunately, Venus is not that far (forby space standards) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on the scope right now. Fortunately, Venus is not that far (by space standards) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on the scope right now.

I'm not quite sure what the second half of the sentence means, after the end parenthesis.

Fortunately, Venus is not that far (forby space standards) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on the scope rightour radar now. Fortunately, Venus is not that far (by space standards) and, thanks to this discovery, Venus is on our radar now.

I give youhave included below the source of this news if you want to know more. I have included below the source of this news if you want to know more.

I can give you the source of this news if you want to knowlearn more. I can give you the source of this news if you want to learn more.

"If you want to know more" is correct, but to my ear, "if you want to learn more" just sounds a slight bit more natural.

I give youHere is the source of this news if you want to know more. Here is the source of this news if you want to know more.

I give you'll leave the source of thisese news if you want to know more. I'll leave the source of these news if you want to know more.

Toxic clouds, acid rain and a huge greenhouse effect can make life on Venus nearly impossible. Toxic clouds, acid rain and a huge greenhouse effect can make life on Venus nearly impossible.