Aug. 6, 2021
On running
Running is difficult for me. The saying is that running is a natural movement for the humans, but for me running for more than 3 minutes was just impossible. My body felt heavy, my mind tired. I tried and I tried. But now I'm seeing the improvement. For me it's all a mental. For some reason my mind always want to abandon. So, I control it as long as I can. Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with being relax. I hope I can learn how to master it, in order to run for more time.
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On running
Running is difficult for me.
The saying is that running is a natural movement for the humans, but for me running for more than 3 minutes was just impossible. The saying is that running is a natural movement for the humans, but for me running for more than 3 minutes was just impossible.
There is a saying that running is a natural movement for humans, but running for more than 3 minutes was impossible for me.
My body felt heavy, my mind tired. My body felt heavy, my mind tired.
My body felt heavy, and my mind was tired.
I tried and I tried.
But now I'm seeing the improvement. But now I'm seeing the improvement.
Now, I´m seeing improvement.
For me it's all a mental. For me it's all a mental.
all mental.
For some reason my mind always want to abandon. For some reason my mind always want to abandon.
For some reason, my mind always wants to quit.
So, I control it as long as I can.
Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with being relax. Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with being relax.
with relaxing.
I hope I can learn how to master it, in order to run for more time. I hope I can learn how to master it, in order to run for more time.
I hope I can learn how to master it to run longer.
On running
Running is difficult for me.
The saying is that running is a natural movement for the humans, but for me running for more than 3 minutes was just impossible.
My body felt heavy, my mind tired.
I tried and I tried.
But now I'm seeing the improvement.
But now I'm seeing improvement.
For me it's all a mental.
For me it's all mental.
For some reason my mind always wants to abandonquit.
For some reason my mind always wants to quit.
"Abandon" needs an object e.g. my mind wants to abandon the attempt. In any case, I think "quit" is the most natural verb for running, either quitting this run or quitting running entirely.
So, I control it as long as I can.
So I control it as long as I can.
Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with being relaxing.
Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with relaxing.
"being relaxed" would have been correct for your chosen phrasing, but "relaxing" sounds more natural.
I hope I can learn how to master it, in order to run for more time.
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I had the same problem! I swear, running nearly killed me haha
Aug. 6, 2021
hahaha Thanks for your corrections
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Running is difficult for me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The saying is that running is a natural movement for the humans, but for me running for more than 3 minutes was just impossible. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The saying is that running is a natural movement for the humans, but for me running for more than 3 minutes was just impossible. The saying is that running is a natural movement for the humans, but for me running for more than 3 minutes was just impossible. There is a saying that running is a natural movement for humans, but running for more than 3 minutes was impossible for me. |
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But now I'm seeing the improvement.
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For me it's all a mental.
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For some reason my mind always want to abandon.
For some reason my mind always wants to "Abandon" needs an object e.g. my mind wants to abandon the attempt. In any case, I think "quit" is the most natural verb for running, either quitting this run or quitting running entirely. For some reason my mind always want to abandon. For some reason my mind always want to abandon. For some reason, my mind always wants to quit. |
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So, I control it as long as I can.
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Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with being relax.
Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with "being relaxed" would have been correct for your chosen phrasing, but "relaxing" sounds more natural. Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with being relax. Sometimes I'm sure my body can do more, but my mind is just so obsessed with being relax. with relaxing. |
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I hope I can learn how to master it, in order to run for more time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I hope I can learn how to master it, in order to run for more time. I hope I can learn how to master it, in order to run for more time. I hope I can learn how to master it to run longer. |
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