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johnnymnemonic

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That's why I learn English

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job. I really want to become a system architect. The most people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development. I was bored in college. All of the study program on our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country. But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing. Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of lemons which life gave me. I concentrated on math and an algorithms. Math has given me a better lifeway than if I had just been a web coder. Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education).

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more. That's the reason why I learn English so intense. Thank you for your help!

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That's why I learn English

I really want to become a system architect.

I was bored in college.

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more.

Thank you for your help!

I really want to become a system architect.

I was bored in college.

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.

Thank you for your help!

I really want to become a system architect.

I was bored in college.

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.

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Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more.


Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more. Although I can study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more.

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to geto for more. Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to go for more.

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That's the reason why I learn English so intense.


That's the reason why I learn English so intensely. That's the reason why I learn English so intensely.

Intensely is an adverb describing the verb learn (adverbs describe verbs)

That's the reason why I learn English so intense.at such an intense pace / That's the reason I study English so intensely / That's the reason I go so intense with English That's the reason I learn English at such an intense pace / That's the reason I study English so intensely / That's the reason I go so intense with English

That's the reason why I learnpractice English so intensely. That's the reason why I practice English so intensely.

Practice makes more sense here, to really emphasize that it is hard work and toilsome.

Thank you for your help!


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I was bored in college.


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That's why I learn English


That's wWhy I learn English Why I learn English

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I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job.


I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job. I don't understand why I prefer difficult tasks instead of common job.

"a" would be used if the phrase following it were singular, but "tasks" is plural

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common jobs. I don't understand why I prefer difficult tasks instead of common jobs.

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job. I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job.

"common" and "difficult" are not exactly contrasting, so this sentence sounds a bit odd.

Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education).


Currently, I have time and a good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, which I got them while Ibecause I got a job instead of a getting a higher education). Currently, I have time and a good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience which I got because I got a job instead of a getting a higher education).

- Instead of "chance", the word "opportunity" might be better here - Do you mean higher education (like a college degree) or a level of education that is prestigious/high quality? - If its prestige --> I have time and a good opportunity to receive a prestigious education in Computer science.

Currently, I have the time, and good a chance to get the perfect higher education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I jobworked instead of a getting a higher education). Currently, I have the time, and good a chance to get the perfect higher education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I worked instead of a getting a higher education).

Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education). Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education).

What is "high education?" Does this mean graduating with good grades?

I really want to become a system architect.


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The most people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.


The mostMost of the people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development. Most of the people in my country just want to be simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.

- Use "of" to describe that you are talking about "a part" of the people of your country. in this case "the part" is "most" of the country

The mMost people in my country just want to be a simple basic programmers without any challenges and without continuous professional development. Most people in my country just want to be basic programmers without any challenges and without continuous professional development.

The mMost people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development. Most people in my country just want to be simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.

All of the study program on our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.


All of the study program os in our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country. All of the study programs in our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

"in" instead of "on" since we are talking about the programs that you department has (the programs within the department"

All of thThe entire study program oin our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country. The entire study program in our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

All of the study program oin our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country. All of the study program in our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.


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Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of lemons which life gave me.


Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" ofut of the lemons whichthat life gave me. Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" out of the lemons that life gave me.

Commonly we don't use this sentence structure when talking about the common idiom "when life gives you lemons, make lemonade." But grammatically, its correct.

Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" ofwith the lemons which life gave me. Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" with the lemons life gave me.

Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of the lemons which life gave me. Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of the lemons life gave me.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms.


I concentrated on math and aon algorithms. I concentrated on math and on algorithms.

Would use "an" if it was a singular algorithm.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms. I concentrated on math and algorithms.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms. I concentrated on math and algorithms.

Math has given me a better lifeway than if I had just been a web coder.


Math has given me a better path in lifeway than if I had just been a web coder. Math has given me a better path in life than if I had just been a web coder.

Lifeway is not a word we use in english. I wrote an option for what I think you were trying to say?

Math has given me a better lifeway path than if I had just been a web coder. Math has given me a better life path than if I had just been a web coder.

Math has given me a better path in lifeway than if I had just been a web coder. Math has given me a better path in life than if I had just been a web coder.

"lifeway" isn't a word.

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