What is a habit you’d like to breakstop? What is a habit you’d like to stop?

I also eat snacks around 3 PM. I eat snacks around 3 PM.

Removing the "also" because nothing came before this statement.

I also eat snacks around 3 PM. I eat snacks around 3 PM.

3 pm or am?

I alwayso eat snacks around 3 PM. I always eat snacks around 3 PM.

I also eat snacks around 3 PM. I eat snacks around 3 PM.

"Also" is used when you are providing additional information. This is the first piece of information, so "also" cannot be used.

I also eat snacks around 3 PM. I eat snacks around 3 PM.

There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releasones appear one ofafter the other. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan, and new ones appear one after the other.

I wouldn't say "release" for something you'd eat. "Release" makes me think more of games and software.

There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the othersnacks are frequently released. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan, and new snacks are frequently released.

This sounds more natural.

There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the otherones are released every so often. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan, and new ones are released every so often.

This is a more natural way to say it :)

There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the after another. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan, and new releases appear one after another.

There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one ofafter the other. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan, and new releases appear one after the other.

There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the after another. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan, and new releases appear one after another.

I changed this phrase to sound more natural as an English speaker.

Snacks tastedhat are salty or made of rice flour are really manyplentiful in Japan. Snacks that are salty or made of rice flour are really plentiful in Japan.

I would probably phrase this as: "There are many salty and rice flour snacks in Japan."

Snacks tasted salty oralty snacks or snacks made of rice flour are really manypopular in Japan. Salty snacks or snacks made of rice flour are really popular in Japan.

Snacks tastedhat are salty or made of rice flour are really manycommon in Japan. Snacks that are salty or made of rice flour are really common in Japan.

Snacks that tasted salty or are made of rice flour are really manyvery common in Japan. Snacks that taste salty or are made of rice flour are very common in Japan.

Snacks that tasted salty or which are made of rice flour are really manycommon in Japan. Snacks that taste salty or which are made of rice flour are really common in Japan.

Snacks tasted salty orThere are lots of salty snacks and snacks made out of rice flour are really many in Japan. There are lots of salty snacks and snacks made out of rice flour in Japan.

What kind of snacks isare famous in your country? What kind of snacks are famous in your country?

What kind of snacks isare famous in your country? What kind of snacks are famous in your country?

"Is" = one, "are" = more than one. Be careful with plurals!

What kind of snacks isare famous in your country? What kind of snacks are famous in your country?

What kind of snacks isare famous in your country? What kind of snacks are famous in your country?

If you're referring to multiple objects, use the verb "are," not "is." A famous snack in the United States is Doritos. In the Philippines, a famous snack is ube jam: https://www.tripzilla.com/tpb-legendary-filipino-snacks/113513.

I’ll look ithem up on Amazon. I’ll look them up on Amazon.

Just a plural issue again. "It" = one, "them" = more than one!

I’ll look ithem up on Amazon. I’ll look them up on Amazon.

Since you're referring to multiple snacks based on the previous sentence, use "them" instead of "it".