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I also eat snacks around 3 PM. I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them. There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the other. Snacks tasted salty or made of rice flour are really many in Japan. What kind of snacks is famous in your country? I’ll look it up on Amazon.
What is a habit you’d like to breakstop?
I also eat snacks around 3 PM.
3 pm or am?
I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releases appear one of the othersnacks are frequently released.
This sounds more natural.
Snacks tasted salty oralty snacks or snacks made of rice flour are really manypopular in Japan.
What kind of snacks is famous in your country?
I’ll look it up on Amazon.
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There are local snacks and biscuits, sweet, soda, etc.
For natural local snacks, we have groundnuts (aka peanuts but we call it groundnuts), roasted plantain, roasted corn.
Flour made local snacks: fish pie, puff puff, buns, egg roll.
Among young generations, flour made snacks is more common. They do eat the natural snacks too but I'm not sure if it's that common, but I love them all 😅.
What is a habit you’d like to break?
I also eat snacks around 3 PM.
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I know it’s not good, but I can’t help but eat them.
There are a lot of tasty snacks in Japan , and new releasones appear one ofafter the other.
I wouldn't say "release" for something you'd eat. "Release" makes me think more of games and software.
Snacks tastedhat are salty or made of rice flour are really manyplentiful in Japan.
I would probably phrase this as: "There are many salty and rice flour snacks in Japan."
What kind of snacks isare famous in your country?
I’ll look it up on Amazon.
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In the United States, Twinkies (made by Hostess, I believe), are an iconic sugary treat. They're little, soft pastries filled with cream, and there's two tiny holes on the back where the cream is inserted in the factory. My family and I don't get them super often, but whenever we do, I've always loved toasting them. The pastry shell gets crispy and caramelizes just a little. The holes make it a little awkward to do that, though!
Apparently some people like deep frying them. Though, us Americans will deep fry just about anything, haha!
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