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There is a persimmon tree that was planted by previous owner at my sister's house.
The tree had a lot of fruits also this year, but my sister don’t eat them a lot.
So my parents got two buckets of persimmons and brought our house.
However, neither my sister nor my parents don't eat a lot of persimmons.
If so, who eats those persimmons? It’s me!

Normally I would be very happy, but now I'm on a diet, so I'm a little stuck.
For the past few days, I've been eating one or two at a day, but I've gained a little weight, which I had started to lose.
Fruit contain more sugar than I think, so I must to be careful.


妹の家には前の住人が植えた柿の木があります。
今年も沢山実がなりましたが、妹はあまり食べません。
そこで両親がバケツ2つ分の柿を貰って来ました。
でも両親もそんなに食べません。
誰が食べるのか?それは私です。

いつもならとても喜ぶのですが、今はダイエットしてるので、少し困ります。
ここ数日、1、2個ずつ食べていたのですが、せっかく減り始めていた体重が少し増えてしまいました。
果物は思った以上に糖分があるので、気をつけないといけません。

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It’s me!

Normally I would be very happy, but now I'm on a diet, so I'm a little stuck.

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pThe Persimmon Tree The Persimmon Tree

There is a persimmon tree that was planted by previous owner at my sister's house.


There is a persimmon tree in my sister's house that was planted by the previous owner at my sister's house. There is a persimmon tree in my sister's house that was planted by the previous owner.

There is a persimmon tree that was planted by a previous owner at my sister's house. There is a persimmon tree that was planted by a previous owner at my sister's house.

The tree had a lot of fruits also this year, but my sister don’t eat them a lot.


The tree hadbore a lot of fruits also this year, but my sister don’idn't eat them a lotmost of them. The tree bore a lot of fruits this year, but my sister didn't eat most of them.

Depending on what idea you want to convey, you could also use: "but my sister didn't really eat them" "but my sister didn't eat much of them"

The tree hadalways bears a lot of fruits also as it had this year, but my sister don’idn't eat them a lot of them. The tree always bears a lot of fruit as it had this year, but my sister didn't eat a lot of them.

"Fruit" can be both singular and plural in the US.

So my parents got two buckets of persimmons and brought our house.


So my parents got two buckets of persimmons and brought them to our house. So my parents got two buckets of persimmons and brought them to our house.

So my parents gotpicked two buckets of persimmons and brought them into to our house. So my parents picked two buckets of persimmons and brought them into to our house.

美味しそう!羨ましい〜!

However, neither my sister nor my parents don't eat a lot of persimmons.


However, neither my sister nor my parents don't eat a lot ofeat persimmons. However, neither my sister nor my parents eat persimmons.

However, nNeither my sister nor my parents don't, however, eat a lot of persimmons. Neither my sister nor my parents, however, eat a lot of persimmons.

残念。 neither ... nor → these are negative so we use an affirmative verb with them to state a negative

If so, who eats those persimmons?


If so, who eats those persimmonsthat's the case, then who eats them? If that's the case, then who eats them?

If so,So who eats all of thoese persimmons? So who eats all of these persimmons?

Since this is the case, who eats those persimmons?

It’s me!


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Normally I would be very happy, but now I'm on a diet, so I'm a little stuck.


Normally I would be very happymore than happy to eat them, but now I'm on a diet, so I'm a little stuckrestraining myself. Normally I would be more than happy to eat them, but now I'm on a diet, so I'm restraining myself.

We don't really use the word "stuck" in that sense so I changed it to "I'm restraining myself" because I think it sounds more natural. :D

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For the past few days, I've been eating one or two at a day, but I've gained a little weight, which I had started to lose.


For the past few days, I've been eating one or two at a day, but I've gained a little weight, which I had started to lose. For the past few days, I've been eating one or two a day, but I've gained a little weight, which I had started to lose.

For the past few days, I've been eating one or two at a day, but I've gained a little weight, which I had started to lose. For the past few days, I've been eating one or two a day, but I've gained a little weight, which I had started to lose.

あっ、残念!I'd eat them anyway, lol. They're just fruit and fruit is good for us!

Fruit contain more sugar than I think, so I must to be careful.


Fruit contains more sugar than I think, so I must to be careful. Fruit contains more sugar than I think, so I must be careful.

You can either say "I must be careful" or "I have to be careful"

Fruit contains more sugar than I think, so I must to be careful. Fruit contains more sugar than I think, so I must be careful.

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