Aug. 23, 2022
My daughter entered elementary school at this April. Now she is in the long summer vacation. However, on weekdays, both I and my wife work, so we can't take care of her. We leave her in the care of "gakudo". "Gakudo" is like a less formal school. Many children in the same situation study and play togather there. When I was a kid, my grandmom took care of me. I don't know about "Gakudo" well, but it's sounds fun. I envy my daughter a little.
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This sounds more natural in the US.
My daughter entered elementary school at this (past) April.
My daughter entered elementary school this (past) April.
Now she is in thehas a long summer vacation.
Now she has a long summer vacation.
Your sentence is technically correct but this is more how'd we say it in the US.
However, oOn weekdays, both I and my wifehowever, my wife and I both work, so we can't take care of her.
On weekdays, however, my wife and I both work, so we can't take care of her.
or, even better:
On weekdays, however, my wife and I both work, so we can't look after her.
We leave her in the care of a "gakudo"."
We leave her in the care of a "gakudo."
"Gakudo" is like aschool but it's less formal school.
"Gakudo" is like school but it's less formal.
Many children in the samesimilar situations study and play togathere togethere.
Many children in similar situations study and play there together.
When I was a kid, my grandmom took care of me.
I don't know much about "Gakudo" well," but it's sounds fun.
I don't know much about "Gakudo," but it sounds fun.
I'm not sure whether to capitalize, "Gakudo/gakudo," or not.
I envy my daughter a little.
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MThis April, my daughter entered elementary school at this April.
This April, my daughter entered elementary school.
There's nothing wrong with putting "this April" at the end, but I think it sounds better if it starts the sentence.
Now she is ion ther long summer vacation.
Now she is on her long summer vacation.
However, on weekdays, both I and my wife and I work, so we can't take care of her.
However, on weekdays, both my wife and I work, so we can't take care of her.
In English, when we are listing people, it's usually seen as polite (or proper) to put "I" or "me" as the last thing in the list. But your sentence is fine on its own!
We leave her in the care of a "gakudo". We leave her in the care of a "gakudo".
'of "gakudo"' would imply that gakudo is a person.
"Gakudo" is like a less formal form of school. "Gakudo" is like a less formal form of school.
Many children in the same situation study and play togaether there.
Many children study and play together there.
When I was a kid, my grandmom took care of me.
I don't know much about "Gakudos" well, but it'sthey sounds fun.
I don't know much about "Gakudos", but they sound fun.
I envy my daughter a little.
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My Child's Education This sounds more natural in the US. |
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My daughter entered elementary school at this April.
There's nothing wrong with putting "this April" at the end, but I think it sounds better if it starts the sentence.
My daughter entered elementary school |
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Now she is in the long summer vacation.
Now she is
Now she Your sentence is technically correct but this is more how'd we say it in the US. |
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However, on weekdays, both I and my wife work, so we can't take care of her.
However, on weekdays, both In English, when we are listing people, it's usually seen as polite (or proper) to put "I" or "me" as the last thing in the list. But your sentence is fine on its own!
or, even better: On weekdays, however, my wife and I both work, so we can't look after her. |
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We leave her in the care of "gakudo". We leave her in the care of a "gakudo". We leave her in the care of a "gakudo". 'of "gakudo"' would imply that gakudo is a person.
We leave her in the care of a "gakudo |
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"Gakudo" is like a less formal school. "Gakudo" is like a less formal form of school. "Gakudo" is like a less formal form of school.
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Many children in the same situation study and play togather there.
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When I was a kid, my grandmom took care of me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't know about "Gakudo" well, but it's sounds fun.
I don't know much about "Gakudos"
I don't know much about "Gakudo I'm not sure whether to capitalize, "Gakudo/gakudo," or not. |
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I envy my daughter a little. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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