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Hi, it's my first time being here and like, i was looking for a place where i would be able to make coversations with native english speaker but unforturnatly i didn't find this place. Dive a bit more and that lead me here. I am happy to be here because i really thing it's a ggod way to pratice my english thinking and writting skills.
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english journey 1


eEnglish journey 1 English journey 1

e(My) English jJourney 1 (My) English Journey 1

eEnglish jJourney 1 English Journey 1

eOPTION A: English journey 1 OPTION B: English Journey 1 OPTION A: English journey 1 OPTION B: English Journey 1

NOTE: Since this is the title of your entry, OPTION B is more common. However, OPTION A is also possible.

Hi, it's my first time being here and like, i was looking for a place where i would be able to make coversations with native english speaker but unforturnatly i didn't find this place.


Hi, it's my first time being here, and like, iI was looking for a place where iI would be able to makehave a conversations with native eEnglish speakers, but unforturnately i, I didn't find thissuch a place. Hi, it's my first time being here, and like, I was looking for a place where I would be able to have a conversation with native English speakers, but unfortunately, I didn't find such a place.

You could also rewrite it a bit to avoid run-on sentences like this: Hi, it's my first time being here. I was looking for a place where I would be able to have a conversation with native English speakers. Unfortunately, I couldn't find such a place.

Hi, it's my first time being here and like, i was looking for a place where i Iwould be able to makehave coversations with native eEnglish speakers, but unforturnately i didn't find this/such a place. Hi, it's my first time here and like, i was looking for a place where Iwould be able to have coversations with native English speakers, but unfortunately i didn't find this/such a place.

Hi, it's my first time being here and like, i. I was looking for a place where iI would be able to makhave conversations with native eEnglish speakers, but unforturnately iI didn't find this place at first. Hi, it's my first time being here. I was looking for a place where I would be able to have conversations with native English speakers, but unfortunately I didn't find this place at first.

There are basically three ideas in this: 1. first time 2. tried to find a place to talk 3. didn't find it It is most natural to keep ideas 2 and 3 together, since they are so closely related. Since you eventually did find a place, it wouldn't be correct to say that you didn't find it, because that sounds like you gave up and never found it. Adding "at first" sets up the next idea.

Hi, it's my first time being here and like, iI was looking for a place where i wI could be able to makhave coversations with native english speaker, but unforturnately i, I didn't find this place. Hi, it's my first time being here and like, I was looking for a place where I could have coversations with native english speaker, but unfortunately, I didn't find this place.

I have seen other poeple correct it a different way which i believe is correct and maybe closer to your wording. So, I thought I might correct in a way that sounded natural to me. I did the "I could" which seems more casual or natural to me. I realized the unfortunately was off. Of course I didn't try to spell it which might have helped me learn (haha on me), I looked it up. Might need more time to learn the spelling on that one (me I mean).

Hi, it's my first time being here and like, i. I was looking for a place where iI would be able to makehold conversations with native eEnglish speakers, but unforturnately i, I didn't find thissuch a place. Hi, it's my first time being here. I was looking for a place where I would be able to hold conversations with native English speakers, but unfortunately, I didn't find such a place.

Hi, it's my first time (being) here and (like, i) I was looking for a place where i would be able to makhave conversations with native eEnglish speakers but unforturnately i didn't find this placethis place have live chat options. Hi, it's my first time (being) here and (like) I was looking for a place where have conversations with native English speakers but unfortunately this place have live chat options.

NOTE: The words "being" and "like" can be deleted.

Dive a bit more and that lead me here.


Dived a bit more and that lead me here. Dived a bit more and that led me here.

Changed it to past tense.

Dive a bit more and that lead meAfter digging a bit more, I was led here. After digging a bit more, I was led here.

DiI dove a bit more and that lead me here. I dove a bit more and that lead me here.

Dive a bit more, and that lead me here. Dive a bit more, and that led me here.

While the whole thing works for like a free flowing thought thing, and I might even say it. I think it might be run on. So, correct, but not 'correct.' So in that vein, if i was writing a paper or something and wanted totally correct grammer I might say. "So after that, I dove a bit more into it, and that led me here." Or I might just do. "I dove a bit more, and that led me here."

DI dived a bit moredeeper and that lead me here. I dived a bit deeper and that lead me here.

Dive a bit more and that lead OPTION A: A bit more internet searching lead me here. OPTION B: After a bit more internet searching, I came here. OPTION A: A bit more internet searching lead me here. OPTION B: After a bit more internet searching, I came here.

I am happy to be here because i really thing it's a ggod way to pratice my english thinking and writting skills.


I am happy to be here because iI really thingk it's a ggood way to practice my eEnglish thinking and writting skills. I am happy to be here because I really think it's a good way to practice my English thinking and writing skills.

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I am happy to be here because iI really thing it's a ggood way to practice my eEnglish thinking and writting skills. I am happy to be here because I really thing it's a good way to practice my English thinking and writing skills.

I am happy to be here because iI really thingk it's a ggood way to practice my eEnglish thinking and writting skills. I am happy to be here because I really think it's a good way to practice my English thinking and writing skills.

I am happy to be here because i really thingk it's a ggood way to practice my english thinking and writting skills. I am happy to be here because i really think it's a good way to practice my english thinking and writing skills.

Just spelling and such mostly.

I am happy to be here because iI really thingk it's a ggood way to practice my eEnglish thinking and writting skills. I am happy to be here because I really think it's a good way to practice my English thinking and writing skills.

I am happy to be here because i really thing it's a ggood way to practice my eEnglish thinking and writting skills. I am happy to be here because i really thing it's a good way to practice my English thinking and writing skills.

REMARQUE : En anglais (et en allemand), les noms de langues étrangères s'écrivent toujours avec une majuscule.

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i'am waiting for your feed back.


i'aI'm waiting for your feed back. I'm waiting for your feedback.

"feedback" is a single word :)

i'aI’m waiting for your feed back. I’m waiting for your feedback.

i'aI'm waiting for your feed back. I'm waiting for your feed back.

i'aI'm waiting for your feed back. I'm waiting for your feed back.

i'I am waiting for your feed back. I am waiting for your feedback.

i'OPTION A: I'm waiting for your feedback. OPTION B: I am waiting for your feed back. OPTION A: I'm waiting for your feedback. OPTION B: I am waiting for your feedback.

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