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November fifth 2022

Today,I got up very late ,and I felt also terrible.I read a book named Frankenstein about an hour and ate a hamburger and a half of chicken as lunch which cost twenty RMB.
At Afternoon,I was told my little brother got a 95 in the Chinese exam and 110 in the English exam.His essay written in the Chinese test paper really moved me.He said it was our mother who take him leave the fog when he was abused by his classmates.
I am very happy to see he have such a big progress.I hope my family to be better day by days.
Thank you for checking on my journal,if you have any questions about Chinese,you can ask me.I will do my best to help you.

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November fFifth, 2022

Today, I got up very late , and I felt also felt terrible. I read a book named /called “Frankenstein” for about an hour and ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken as lunch, which cost twenty RMB.

Make sure to insert a blank space after each comma and period. This is much more important in English than in Chinese.
WRONG: I ate chicken,beef and pork.They tasted good.
RIGHT: I ate chicken, beef and pork. They tasted good.

“Half of a chicken” means 半只鸡。你吃了半只鸡吗?

At AIn the afternoon, I was told my little brother got a 95 ion the Chinese exam and 110 ion the English exam. His essay written infor the Chinese test paper really moved me. He said it was our mother who [take him leave the fog] when he was abused by his classmates.

Is 95 a good score? What was the maximum possible score? 满分是100吗?

I don’t understand “take him leave the fog.” Please explain it. 用中文解释也可以。

I am very happy to see he have such a bigim make so much progress. I hope my family to bewill get better day by days.

The last sentence sounds like your family members are hurt or sick and you hope they will recover.

Thank you for checking on my journal,i entry. If you have any questions about Chinese, you can ask me. I will do my best to help you.

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davidduyaf

Nov. 11, 2022

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Today, I got up very late , and I felt also felt terrible. I read a book named /called “Frankenstein” for about an hour and ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken as lunch, which cost twenty RMB.

Yes, I don’t eat very much. Here we also can order half of chicken to save food and it’s more cheaper.

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davidduyaf

Nov. 11, 2022

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November fFifth, 2022

Thank you for your correction,I am a little busy these days. Hope you don’t mind my late reply to my message.

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davidduyaf

Nov. 11, 2022

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At AIn the afternoon, I was told my little brother got a 95 ion the Chinese exam and 110 ion the English exam. His essay written infor the Chinese test paper really moved me. He said it was our mother who [take him leave the fog] when he was abused by his classmates.

No,Full marks in the Chinese exam is 120, but the Chinese exam is more difficult for us even than English. I think it’s a truly good score compared to what’s he’s got before.
It’s a metaphor but I am not sure it’s correct.😂 Fog means dilemma, so “take him leave the fog means to help him out of trouble.

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davidduyaf

Nov. 11, 2022

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Yes, I don’t eat very much. Here we also can order half of chicken to save food and it’s more cheaper.

Sorry I forgot to add a “a” in the front of chicken.

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JoeTofu

Nov. 11, 2022

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Yes, I don’t eat very much. Here we also can order half of chicken to save food and it’s more cheaper.

“I ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken” means you ate the entire half-chicken during that one meal—there was nothing left over.

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JoeTofu

Nov. 11, 2022

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Thank you for your correction,I am a little busy these days. Hope you don’t mind my late reply to my message.

No, I don’t mind. There’s no deadline. :-)

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JoeTofu

Nov. 11, 2022

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“I ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken” means you ate the entire half-chicken during that one meal—there was nothing left over.

In the US, chickens are large, so eating half of a chicken AND a hamburger sounds like a LOT of food to me.

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davidduyaf

Nov. 14, 2022

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In the US, chickens are large, so eating half of a chicken AND a hamburger sounds like a LOT of food to me.

Lol,I misunderstood you. I thought you can only order a whole chicken in your country. In China, the roast chicken is not that big as yours.

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JoeTofu

Nov. 14, 2022

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Today, I got up very late ,and I felt also terrible. I read a book named Frankenstein for/in about an hour and then ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken as lunch which cost twenty RMBrenminbi.

'To read for an hour' would mean reading up to an hour and 'to read in an hour' would mean to reading the whole thing in one hour. In English, when numbers are written out for money the currency is also written out ($20 -> twenty dollars.)

At AIn the afternoon, I was told my little brother got a 95 infor the Chinese exam and 110 infor the English exam. His essay written in the Chinese test paper really moved me. He said it was our mother who take him leave the fog when he was abused by his classmates.

take him leave the fog (I couldn't translate this part well)

I am very happy to see he have such a bigow he has progress.ed. I hope my family towill be better day by days.

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davidduyaf

Nov. 11, 2022

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At AIn the afternoon, I was told my little brother got a 95 infor the Chinese exam and 110 infor the English exam. His essay written in the Chinese test paper really moved me. He said it was our mother who take him leave the fog when he was abused by his classmates.

It’s a metaphor but I am not sure it’s correct.😂 Fog means dilemma, so “take him leave the fog “means to help him out of trouble.

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davidduyaf

Nov. 11, 2022

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Today, I got up very late ,and I felt also terrible. I read a book named Frankenstein for/in about an hour and then ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken as lunch which cost twenty RMBrenminbi.

Thank you for your correction, I am a little busy recently. I hope you don’t mind my late reply to my message.

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ashlynn1257

Nov. 11, 2022

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It’s a metaphor but I am not sure it’s correct.😂 Fog means dilemma, so “take him leave the fog “means to help him out of trouble.

I understand now

November fifth 2022


November fFifth, 2022

Today,I got up very late ,and I felt also terrible.I read a book named Frankenstein about an hour and ate a hamburger and a half of chicken as lunch which cost twenty RMB.


Today, I got up very late ,and I felt also terrible. I read a book named Frankenstein for/in about an hour and then ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken as lunch which cost twenty RMBrenminbi.

'To read for an hour' would mean reading up to an hour and 'to read in an hour' would mean to reading the whole thing in one hour. In English, when numbers are written out for money the currency is also written out ($20 -> twenty dollars.)

Today, I got up very late , and I felt also felt terrible. I read a book named /called “Frankenstein” for about an hour and ate a hamburger and a half of a chicken as lunch, which cost twenty RMB.

Make sure to insert a blank space after each comma and period. This is much more important in English than in Chinese. WRONG: I ate chicken,beef and pork.They tasted good. RIGHT: I ate chicken, beef and pork. They tasted good. “Half of a chicken” means 半只鸡。你吃了半只鸡吗?

At Afternoon,I was told my little brother got a 95 in the Chinese exam and 110 in the English exam.His essay written in the Chinese test paper really moved me.He said it was our mother who take him leave the fog when he was abused by his classmates.


At AIn the afternoon, I was told my little brother got a 95 infor the Chinese exam and 110 infor the English exam. His essay written in the Chinese test paper really moved me. He said it was our mother who take him leave the fog when he was abused by his classmates.

take him leave the fog (I couldn't translate this part well)

At AIn the afternoon, I was told my little brother got a 95 ion the Chinese exam and 110 ion the English exam. His essay written infor the Chinese test paper really moved me. He said it was our mother who [take him leave the fog] when he was abused by his classmates.

Is 95 a good score? What was the maximum possible score? 满分是100吗? I don’t understand “take him leave the fog.” Please explain it. 用中文解释也可以。

I am very happy to see he have such a big progress.I hope my family to be better day by days.


I am very happy to see he have such a bigow he has progress.ed. I hope my family towill be better day by days.

I am very happy to see he have such a bigim make so much progress. I hope my family to bewill get better day by days.

The last sentence sounds like your family members are hurt or sick and you hope they will recover.

Thank you for checking on my journal,if you have any questions about Chinese,you can ask me.I will do my best to help you.


Thank you for checking on my journal,i entry. If you have any questions about Chinese, you can ask me. I will do my best to help you.

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