Nov. 7, 2021
November 7th, 2021
Today is my youngest son's birthday. He turned 19. I went to the local German cake shop and bought a cake. An elderly German person has been running the shop. His daughter is a radio personality.
今日は次男の誕生日です。彼は19歳になりました。近所のドイツケーキのお店に行って、ケーキを買いました。年配のドイツ人がその店を経営しています。彼の娘さんはラジオのパーソナリティをしています。
I went to the local German cake shop near my house and bought a cake.
I would add more specifics as to where this local German cake shop is because you used "the".
An elderly German person has been runningruns the shop.
Or "An elderly German person has been running the shop for many years." I would add a time expression.
Feb. 6, 2022
Thank you!
November 7th, 2021
Today is my youngest son's birthday.
He turned 19.
I went to the local German cake shop and bought a cake.
An elderly German person has been running the shop.
His daughter is a radio personality.
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Nice post! Hope the cake was delicious.
Nov. 8, 2021
Thank you!
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