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nambatsuyoshi

Nov. 27, 2021

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November 27th, 2021

I watched the local news yesterday evening. It showed the beautiful autumn leaves in Nara Park. Nara Park is about 30 kilometers from my house. I went there this morning. There are a lot of deer in the park. I took some photos.
Here are the photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211127/w800/index-e.html


<p>昨晩、ローカルニュースを見ました。その中で奈良公園の紅葉を紹介していました。奈良公園はうちから30Kmくらいです。今朝、奈良公園に行きました。そこには鹿が沢山います。いくらか写真を撮りました。</p>
<p>こちらがその写真です。</p>
<p>http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211127/w800/index-e.html</p>

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November 27th, 2021

I watched the local news yesterday evening.

It showed the beautiful autumn leaves in Nara Park.

Nara Park is about 30 kilometers from my house.

I went there this morning.

There awere a lot of deer in the park.

I took some photos.

Here are the photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211127/w800/index-e.html

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Nicely done!

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nambatsuyoshi

Nov. 28, 2021

4

Thank you!

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MonsieurBaguette

Nov. 28, 2021

1

You're welcome!

November 27th, 2021


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