Nov. 22, 2021
November 22nd, 2021
Finally, my wife received her second dose of the Pfizer vaccine today. It was raining heavily, so I drove her to the hospital. The cars put on the headlights even though it was still 3 pm.
<p>今日、妻はやっとファイザーワクチンの2回目の接種をしました。雨が強かったので、病院まで車で送りました。まだ午後3時でしたが、車はヘッドライトを点けていました</p>
November 22nd, 2021
Finally, my wifeMy wife finally received her second dose of the Pfizer vaccine today.
Less stop and go, flows better
It was raining heavily, so I drove her to the hospital.
The cCars puthad on their headlights even though it was still 3 pm.
I can see why you wrote your sentence that way, however, it sounds unnatural. I changed it to have more natural grammar.
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Your sentences are good, I'm honestly just giving them more natural grammar. I recommend watching or reading media that is translated close to the original meaning. Have you tried the "Language Learning with Netflix" Chrome extension? You can use it with American shows on Netflix to grasp more natural English.
Nov. 22, 2021
Thank you!
The cCars put on their headlights on even though it was still 3 pm.
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Well done!
Nov. 22, 2021
Thank you!
November 22nd, 2021
Finally, my wifeMy wife finally received her second dose of the Pfizer vaccine today.
Placing finally after the subject is much more natural in this sentence.
The cars put onhad their headlights on even though it was still 3 pm.
This sounds more natural here. You wouldn't "put on" headlights.
Nov. 22, 2021
Thank you!
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November 22nd, 2021 This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Finally, my wife received her second dose of the Pfizer vaccine today.
Placing finally after the subject is much more natural in this sentence.
Less stop and go, flows better |
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It was raining heavily, so I drove her to the hospital. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The cars put on the headlights even though it was still 3 pm. The cars This sounds more natural here. You wouldn't "put on" headlights.
I can see why you wrote your sentence that way, however, it sounds unnatural. I changed it to have more natural grammar. |
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