Nov. 21, 2021
November 21, 2021
I rode my motorcycle to Rurikei in Kyoto today. I also went there on this day last year. Rurikei is in the countryside of Kyoto, and you can see the beautiful autumn leaves. This year's autumn leaves were more beautiful than last year.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211121/w800/index-e.html
<p>今日はバイクで京都のるり渓に行きました。1年前の同じ日にもるり渓に行っていました。るり渓は京都の田舎にあって、綺麗な紅葉を見ることができます。ここの紅葉は昨年より綺麗でした。</p>
<p>こちらが写真です。</p>
<p>http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211121/w800/index-e.html</p>
November 21, 2021
I rode my motorcycle to Rurikei in Kyoto today.
I also went there on this day last yearexactly a year ago from today.
You can get the meaning of this sentence across through multiple variations of the word order, but it will continue to sound rough without more advanced phrasing.
Rurikei is in the countryside of Kyoto, and you can see the beautiful autumn leaves.
This year's autumn leaves were more beautiful than last year.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211121/w800/index-e.html
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Great topic and writing for this journal. Be careful when trying to describe relative time, it can be hard to make the grammar sound natural when you do.
Nov. 23, 2021
Thank you!
November 21, 2021
I rode my motorcycle to Rurikei in Kyoto today.
I also went there on this day last year.
Rurikei is in the countryside of Kyoto, and you can see the beautiful autumn leaves.
This year's autumn leaves were more beautiful than last year.
Here are some photos: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/bike/2021/20211121/w800/index-e.html
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Very good! You are not just a beginner!
Nov. 21, 2021
Thank you!
Nov. 21, 2021
I was going to correct it, but @Andreea is correct. Good job and beautiful photos!
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I rode my motorcycle to Rurikei in Kyoto today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I also went there on this day last year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I You can get the meaning of this sentence across through multiple variations of the word order, but it will continue to sound rough without more advanced phrasing. |
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Rurikei is in the countryside of Kyoto, and you can see the beautiful autumn leaves. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This year's autumn leaves were more beautiful than last year. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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