Nov. 19, 2021
November 19th, 2021
I heard the good news today that Shohei Otani won the MVP in the American League of Major League Baseball.
By the way, I watched a partial lunar eclipse this evening. Although it is a partial lunar eclipse, it is almost a total lunar eclipse because it waned 98%. I took two photos of it.
Here are the photos: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEi9juLakAQnt2K?format=jpg&name=orig
https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEjMuU0aUAMlw74?format=jpg&name=orig
<p>今日は大谷翔平選手が、メジャーリーグのアメリカンリーグでMVPを獲得したという嬉しいニュースを聞きました。</p>
<p>ところで、今晩は部分月食を見ました。部分月食ですが、98％が欠けるのでほとんど皆既月食です。写真を2枚撮りました。</p>
<p>こちらが写真です。</p>
<p>https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEi9juLakAQnt2K?format=jpg&name=orig</p>
<p>https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEjMuU0aUAMlw74?format=jpg&name=orig</p>
Today I heard the good news today that Shohei Otani won the MVP in the American League of Major League Baseball.
Your original sentence works, but this feels more natural
Although it iwas a partial lunar eclipse, it iwas almost a total lunar eclipse because it wanthe shadow covered 98%.
I changed "is" to "was" because you are talking about an event that happened in the past
Your use of "wane" could be considered correct technically, but I changed it since few people would use it that way
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Very good. Beautiful photos! I wish I could have seen it. It was cloudy where I live.
Nov. 21, 2021
Thank you!
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November 19th, 2021 |
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I heard the good news today that Shohei Otani won the MVP in the American League of Major League Baseball. Today I heard the good news Your original sentence works, but this feels more natural |
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By the way, I watched a partial lunar eclipse this evening. |
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Although it is a partial lunar eclipse, it is almost a total lunar eclipse because it waned 98%. Although it I changed "is" to "was" because you are talking about an event that happened in the past Your use of "wane" could be considered correct technically, but I changed it since few people would use it that way |
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I took two photos of it. |
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Here are the photos: https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEi9juLakAQnt2K?format=jpg&name=orig |
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https://pbs.twimg.com/media/FEjMuU0aUAMlw74?format=jpg&name=orig |
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