Nov. 15, 2021
November 15th, 2021
Yesterday, I have reached 3,650,000 steps this year. It was over 10,000 steps a day on average. It is fewer steps than last year, but this year I try not to walk too much.
<p>昨日、今年の歩数が365万歩になりました。1日平均1万歩を超えました。これは昨年より少ないですが、今年は歩きすぎないようにしています。</p>
It waslked an average of over 10,000 steps a day on average.
It is walked fewer steps than last year, but this year I tryecause I tried to not to walk too/as much this year.
Or "I walked less than last year".
I think it would have been good to also include exactly how many steps you walked the year before to make a clearer and better comparison.
Feb. 6, 2022
Thank you!
November 15th, 2021
Yesterday, I have reached 3,650,000 steps this year.
"I have reached 3,650,000 steps this year." is also fine
It was over 10,000 steps a day on average.
It is fewer steps than last year, but this year I trydid not try to walk too much.
Nov. 20, 2021
Thank you!
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Yesterday, I have reached 3,650,000 steps this year. Yesterday, I "I have reached 3,650,000 steps this year." is also fine |
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It is fewer steps than last year, but this year I try not to walk too much. It is fewer steps than last year, but this year I I Or "I walked less than last year". I think it would have been good to also include exactly how many steps you walked the year before to make a clearer and better comparison. |
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