Nov. 14, 2021
November 14th, 2021
While I was walking yesterday morning, I saw some flowers like a cherry blossom. I took a closer look this morning and found that there was a label on the tree which said the tree is Accolade. I googled it and found out that Accolade was made in the UK. It seems that flowers will bloom in spring and autumn.
Here is a photo I took: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1459665344797110276
<p>昨日の朝、歩いていると、桜に似た花を見かけました。今朝、よく見ると、アーコレードと書かれた札が木にぶら下がっているのに気付きました。ググってみるとアーコレードはイギリスで作られた品種のようです。春の秋に花が咲くそうです。</p>
<p>こちらが私が撮った写真です。https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1459665344797110276</p>
While I was walking yesterday morning, I saw some flowers like a cherry blossom.
This sounds more natural
This morning I took a closer look this morning and found that there was a label on the tree, which said the tree is Aan accolade.
More natural sentence structure; added a comma; added "an" for proper grammar; decapitalized noun
I googled it and found out that Athe accolade was made inis native to the UK.
Better verb use, decapitalized noun
It seems that flowers will bloom in spring and autumn.
Here is a photo I took: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1459665344797110276
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Great writing for a beginner! I only noticed small errors and provided more natural ways of writing. Keep it up!
Nov. 20, 2021
Thank you!
While I was walking yesterday morning, I saw some flowers that looked like a cherry blossoms.
I took a closer look this morning and found that there was a label on the tree which said the tree iwas "Accolade".
I googled it and found out that Accolade was made in the UK.
It seems that its flowers will bloom in the spring and autumn.
Or "the"
Nov. 14, 2021
Thank you!
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November 14th, 2021 |
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While I was walking yesterday morning, I saw some flowers like a cherry blossom. While I was walking yesterday morning, I saw some flowers that looked like While This sounds more natural |
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I took a closer look this morning and found that there was a label on the tree which said the tree is Accolade. I took a closer look this morning and found that there was a label on the tree which said the tree This morning I took a closer look More natural sentence structure; added a comma; added "an" for proper grammar; decapitalized noun |
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I googled it and found out that Accolade was made in the UK. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I googled it and found Better verb use, decapitalized noun |
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It seems that flowers will bloom in spring and autumn. It seems that its flowers will bloom in the spring and autumn. Or "the" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here is a photo I took: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1459665344797110276 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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