Nov. 6, 2020
Nov 12th Money Problem (映画館/鬼滅の刃)
Last time I go to cinema watch a movie is more than 10 years ago.
Since I haven’t done that for a long time.
I ask my friend for help.
I know if purchase the ticket early should be cheaper.
Actually, I am just half right.
He told me using VISA card to book a ticket now will be $66.00 compare to the original price $72.00.
So, I book the ticket immediately.
But if I go to cinema directly use VISA card purchase the price will be $56.00.
Another $10.00 difference!
However, now I am guarantee to have a seat that is the benefit.
Will you but a ticket in advance?
LThe last time I gowent to a cinema to watch a movie iwas more than 10 years ago.
Since I havedn’t done that for a long time, I asked my friend for help.
It's better to explain the reason and the action in the same sentence.
I ask my friend for help.
This was moved to be part of the last sentence.
I know if I purchase the ticket early, it should be cheaper.
ActuallyHowever, I am just half right.
HeMy friend told me using a VISA card to book a ticket now will be $66.00, compared to the original price of $72.00.
So, I booked the ticket immediately.
But if I go to the cinema directly use VISA card purchaseand purchase a ticket there with a Visa card, the price will be $56.00.
Another $10.00 difference!
However, now I am guaranteed to have a seat that, which is the benefit of booking early.
Willould you buty a ticket in advance?
Feedback
You got your point across very well. I think just be careful to use past tense when talking about things that happened in the past.
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Nov 12th Money Problem (映画館/鬼滅の刃) |
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Last time I go to cinema watch a movie is more than 10 years ago.
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Since I haven’t done that for a long time. Since I ha It's better to explain the reason and the action in the same sentence. |
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I ask my friend for help.
This was moved to be part of the last sentence. |
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I know if purchase the ticket early should be cheaper. I know if I purchase the ticket early, it should be cheaper. |
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Actually, I am just half right.
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He told me using VISA card to book a ticket now will be $66.00 compare to the original price $72.00.
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So, I book the ticket immediately. So, I booked the ticket immediately. |
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But if I go to cinema directly use VISA card purchase the price will be $56.00. But if I go to the cinema |
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Another $10.00 difference! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, now I am guarantee to have a seat that is the benefit. However, now I am guaranteed to have a seat |
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Will you but a ticket in advance? W |
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