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Pyppat

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Just chilling at home

My expectations: Be with my family, Read new books, recive and give presents, do exercise.
The reality: Staying home with my pets, Laziness, no money to presents.
It looks sad, but... it's comfortable.

(I'm very excited to take a pic of my rooster at Christmas. It will be one year since I got him. )


Minhas expectativas: Ficar com a minha família, ler livros novos, receber e dar presentes, fazer exercícios.
A Realidade: Ficar em casa com os meus pets, preguiça, sem dinheiro para presentes.
Parece triste, mas... é confortável.

(eu estou muito animada para tirar uma foto do meu galo no natal. Vai fazer um ano desde que eu o tenho)

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Just chilling at home

VERY natural and colloquial

My expectations: Be with my family, Rread new books, receive and give presents, do exercise.

The reality: Staying home with my pets, Llaziness, no money tofor presents.

I assumed you were saying that you don't have sufficient money for buying presents but I'm not sure.

It looks sad, but... it's comfortable.

(I'm very excited to take a pic of my rooster athis Christmas/on Christmas day.

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Good job. I hope you enjoy your holiday season. I hope the rooster doesn't keep you up too late. Boas festas!

My expectations: Be with my family, Rread new books, receive and give presents, ando exercise.

The reality: Staying home with my pets, Llaziness, no money tofor presents.

It lookseems sad, but... it's comfortable.

(I'm very excited to take a pic of my rooster aton Christmas.

It will be one year since I got him. )

My expectations: Be with my family, Read new books, recive and give presents, do exercise.


My expectations: Be with my family, Rread new books, receive and give presents, ando exercise.

My expectations: Be with my family, Rread new books, receive and give presents, do exercise.

The reality: Staying home with my pets, Laziness, no money to presents.


The reality: Staying home with my pets, Llaziness, no money tofor presents.

The reality: Staying home with my pets, Llaziness, no money tofor presents.

I assumed you were saying that you don't have sufficient money for buying presents but I'm not sure.

It looks sad, but... it's comfortable.


It lookseems sad, but... it's comfortable.

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(I'm very excited to take a pic of my rooster at Christmas.


(I'm very excited to take a pic of my rooster aton Christmas.

(I'm very excited to take a pic of my rooster athis Christmas/on Christmas day.

It will be one year since I got him. )


It will be one year since I got him. )

Just chilling at home


Just chilling at home

VERY natural and colloquial

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