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superman123

Nov. 24, 2023

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as the average guy who uses google windows chrome etc etc i dont mind telemetry at all its that i dont have nothing to hide its because you cant hide why should i care about linux i love the terminal and how it works but there isnt that good enough reason to switch i will keep using it until i find it also 60% of the linux community act like the vegans of computers

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aAs the average guy who uses google, windows, chrome, etc etc i. (etc.), I don't mind telemetry at all itsdata collection at all. It's not that iI don't have noanything to hide that I care about, it's because you can't hide w. Why should iI care about lLinux i? I love the terminal and how it works but there isn't thata good enough reason to switch i. I will keep using it until iI find it aa better alternative. Also, 60% of the lLinux community acts like the vegans of the computers world.

Two etc. sounds good in speaking, but looks strange in writing.

Telemetry is not used by average speakers, we call it data collection/mining.

Saying someone acts like a vegan is really vague and can be interpreted in a number of ways, including some offensive ones. I would change it to say what you don't like about how they act. Ex. "60% of the community acts entitled/holier than thou/etc."

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nNothing

as the average guy who uses google windows chrome etc etc i dont mind telemetry at all its that i dont have nothing to hide its because you cant hide why should i care about linux i love the terminal and how it works but there isnt that good enough reason to switch i will keep using it until i find it also 60% of the linux community act like the vegans of computers


aAs the average guy who uses google, windows, chrome, etc etc i. (etc.), I don't mind telemetry at all itsdata collection at all. It's not that iI don't have noanything to hide that I care about, it's because you can't hide w. Why should iI care about lLinux i? I love the terminal and how it works but there isn't thata good enough reason to switch i. I will keep using it until iI find it aa better alternative. Also, 60% of the lLinux community acts like the vegans of the computers world.

Two etc. sounds good in speaking, but looks strange in writing. Telemetry is not used by average speakers, we call it data collection/mining. Saying someone acts like a vegan is really vague and can be interpreted in a number of ways, including some offensive ones. I would change it to say what you don't like about how they act. Ex. "60% of the community acts entitled/holier than thou/etc."

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