Oct. 24, 2021
My favorite feature of my smart phone is note-taking apps.
As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere.
WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps.
There are some advantages rather than analog notes.
On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.
And I can search contents quickly and easily.
I will keep using the note-taking apps.
Note-taking Apps.
My favorite feature of my smart phone isare note-taking apps.
"Smartphone" is one word.
Apps is plural. If you are talking about one particular app then you can say "My favorite feature of my smartphone is the note-taking app"
As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere.
WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps.
Don't need to repeat.
On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.
"On the plus side" is a very good phrase but you already mentioned "advantages" so it seems repetitive.
It is more useful if you are also stating negatives. For example:
"On the plus side, I love the convenience of note-taking apps but I miss the feeling of writing with a pen and paper".
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Note-taking Apps. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
My favorite feature of my smart phone is note-taking apps. My favorite feature of my smart "Smartphone" is one word. Apps is plural. If you are talking about one particular app then you can say "My favorite feature of my smartphone is the note-taking app" |
As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere. As I always bring my smart |
WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps. WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and Don't need to repeat. |
There are some advantages rather than analog notes. |
On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.
"On the plus side" is a very good phrase but you already mentioned "advantages" so it seems repetitive. It is more useful if you are also stating negatives. For example: "On the plus side, I love the convenience of note-taking apps but I miss the feeling of writing with a pen and paper". |
And I can search contents quickly and easily. |
I will keep using the note-taking apps. |
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