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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 24, 2021

402
Note-taking Apps.

My favorite feature of my smart phone is note-taking apps.

As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere.

WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps.

There are some advantages rather than analog notes.

On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.

And I can search contents quickly and easily.

I will keep using the note-taking apps.

Corrections

Note-taking Apps.

My favorite feature of my smart phone isare note-taking apps.

"Smartphone" is one word.

Apps is plural. If you are talking about one particular app then you can say "My favorite feature of my smartphone is the note-taking app"

As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere.

WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps.

Don't need to repeat.

On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.

"On the plus side" is a very good phrase but you already mentioned "advantages" so it seems repetitive.

It is more useful if you are also stating negatives. For example:

"On the plus side, I love the convenience of note-taking apps but I miss the feeling of writing with a pen and paper".

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Great. Well done 👍🏿

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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 25, 2021

402

Thank you so much.

Note-taking Apps.


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My favorite feature of my smart phone is note-taking apps.


My favorite feature of my smart phone isare note-taking apps.

"Smartphone" is one word. Apps is plural. If you are talking about one particular app then you can say "My favorite feature of my smartphone is the note-taking app"

As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere.


As I always bring my smart phone, I can write notes anytime and anywhere.

WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps.


WIth these notes on my phone, I can save my ideas and my insights on the apps.

Don't need to repeat.

There are some advantages rather than analog notes.


On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.


On the plus side, I can write it anytime as I already mentioned.

"On the plus side" is a very good phrase but you already mentioned "advantages" so it seems repetitive. It is more useful if you are also stating negatives. For example: "On the plus side, I love the convenience of note-taking apps but I miss the feeling of writing with a pen and paper".

And I can search contents quickly and easily.


I will keep using the note-taking apps.


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