Sept. 15, 2020
Not Me
This is a story of a young Hong Kong man so passion about Japan.
Since a child he already loves Japan.
He spent a year in Japan to learn Japanese as University student.
After return back to Hong Kong.
He was working in Japan company.
When his age nearly 30, he wants to start his own business.
So, he decided to go Japan and start his own business.
Now, the company is in serious situation because of the virus.
At 2017 I also try to open a business in Hong Kong.
The business was ended at 2019.
I hope someday I can go to Japan and start my business.
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Not Me
This is a story ofabout a young Hong Kong man so passionate about Japan.
Since he was a child, he already lovesd Japan.
He spent a year in Japan to learning Japanese as Ua university student.
He was working inAfter returning to Hong Kong, he worked in a Japanese company.
Combine with the last sentence. "After return back to Hong Kong" is not a complete sentence on its own.
When his agee was nearly 30, he wantsed to start his own business.
So, he decided to go to Japan and start his own business.
Now, the company is in a serious situation because of the virus.
Or: "Now, the company is in dire straits because of the virus."
AtIn 2017 I also tryied to open a business in Hong Kong.
The business was ended atin 2019.
Or: "The business closed in 2019."
I hope someday I can go to Japan and start my own business.
Or: "I hope someday I can go to Japan and start another business."
Sept. 15, 2020
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At 2017 I also try to open a business in Hong Kong.
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The business was ended at 2019. The business Or: "The business closed in 2019." |
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I hope someday I can go to Japan and start my business. I hope someday I can go to Japan and start my own business. Or: "I hope someday I can go to Japan and start another business." |
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This is a story of a young Hong Kong man so passion about Japan. This is a story |
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Since a child he already loves Japan. Since he was a child, he |
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He spent a year in Japan to learn Japanese as University student. He spent a year in Japan |
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After return back to Hong Kong. |
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He was working in Japan company.
Combine with the last sentence. "After return back to Hong Kong" is not a complete sentence on its own. |
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When his age nearly 30, he wants to start his own business. When h |
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So, he decided to go Japan and start his own business. So, he decided to go to Japan and start his own business. |
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Now, the company is in serious situation because of the virus. Now, the company is in a serious situation because of the virus. Or: "Now, the company is in dire straits because of the virus." |
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