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I meant by "not real" that I think we belive we are in safety in this world if we have a house, a job and surround ourself with others and keep stick to these things by behaving how others want us to, but more often this safety is just fake. We use the word "home" out of habit, we often work somewhere where we don't want to and think it's the best way to live. But I think it's mostly just existence, and in existence safety is just a barrier to change.

Oh, let me correct myself quickly, I was in a bit of hurry :D "believe", "ourselves", "keep sticking to",

So kind of like security? And then the job and house part are the examples that support your point?

Security is a physical safety thing as I know, that's why I used safety instead. And yes, the house and job part are examples, exactly. However, maybe I'm wrong in general and there are places where people live a real life. But in my country, most people live as I said, and without even realizing it's a problem.

Ah, security can also be used to mean stability, for example when people say "job security" it's how easily one can find and keep a job.

In that case, I would suggest to maybe start another sentence regarding the job and house. The sentence structure is parallel at the moment (ie. __ which is __, etc.) which might give the impression that safety, job, and house all hold equal roles in the sentence, wherein, really, safety is the argument, while job and house are the supporting points.

Interesting idea, I'm sure I'll try it out next time, if I want to use this type of... structure. Thank you. :)

My pleasure :)

Thank you. To be honest, I'm always a little poetic, so it's good news for me. But I need to learn write in English with a more formal/literal style, so I should try to be less poetic sometimes. However, I'm glad to know I slowly getting better.

Wow, thanks! I try to use more complex sentences, like that you corrected with commas, but yeah... I really need to practice with them. It's still a little difficult for me, but I'm trying. In my native language, I'm the one who writes complex four-line sentences, but I try to think in English, instead of just use it, but it's not going so well yet. Thank you again! :)