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ponta

July 22, 2021

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My apartment room faces a road and an intersection, so there is quite a traffic volume during the day. I don't mind the sound of the traffic ordinally, but sometimes a really noisy car or motorbike passes by, which is bothering me. The noisy cars are tuned to make the exhaust sound loud. I also like engine sounds, but I don't want to listen to them when I'm in bed. This problem will be solved when all the cars are displaced by electric vehicles in the future.

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Noises

My apartment bedroom faces a road and an intersection, so there is quite a large volume of traffic volume during the day.

The change I made was to stay closer to your original sentence but it's more natural to say;

"My bedroom looks onto a road and an intersection, so there is a lot of traffic during the day."

Ordinarily, I don't mind the sound of the traffic ordinally, but sometimes a really noisy car or motorbike passes by, which is botherings me.

The noisy cars are tuned to make the exhaust sound loud.

I also like engine sounds, but I don't want to listen to them when I'm in bed.

This problem will be solved when all the cars are disreplaced by electric vehicles in the future.

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ponta

July 23, 2021

217

Thank you so much!

Noises


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My apartment room faces a road and an intersection, so there is quite a traffic volume during the day.


My apartment bedroom faces a road and an intersection, so there is quite a large volume of traffic volume during the day.

The change I made was to stay closer to your original sentence but it's more natural to say; "My bedroom looks onto a road and an intersection, so there is a lot of traffic during the day."

I don't mind the sound of the traffic ordinally, but sometimes a really noisy car or motorbike passes by, which is bothering me.


Ordinarily, I don't mind the sound of the traffic ordinally, but sometimes a really noisy car or motorbike passes by, which is botherings me.

The noisy cars are tuned to make the exhaust sound loud.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I also like engine sounds, but I don't want to listen to them when I'm in bed.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This problem will be solved when all the cars are displaced by electric vehicles in the future.


This problem will be solved when all the cars are disreplaced by electric vehicles in the future.

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