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May 3, 2021

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First of all, the first quarter (4 months) of 2021 was gone!

2 days later in Chinese calendar is the “began summer” day.

Means spring was over and simmer start arrive.

In Hong Kong the four season is not as clear as place like Japan.

But we still can tell when is spring, summer, autumn and winter.

As a man I love summer, please don’t ask me why.

Going back to the question of achievement for last 4 months.

Great! I did actually make few things happened, like real money investment, making friends from the internet…

I would call it a good start but yet far from what I expect.

So, more hard work is necessary.

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Great!

So, more hard work is necessary.

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First of all, the first quarter (4 months) of 2021 was gone!


First of all, tThe first quarter (4 months) of 2021 wais gone! The first quarter (4 months) of 2021 is gone!

I can't quite explain why "first of all" doesn't work here. I think maybe because "first of all" is usually said when listing multiple points, instead of in a descriptive situation like this journal entry is.

2 days later in Chinese calendar is the “began summer” day.


2 days later in Chinese calendar is the "beganinning of summer" day. 2 days later in Chinese calendar is the "beginning of summer" day.

Means spring was over and simmer start arrive.


MThat means spring wais over and simmer startand summer is arriveing. That means spring is over and and summer is arriving.

In Hong Kong the four season is not as clear as place like Japan.


In Hong Kong the four season iss are not as clear as in places like Japan. In Hong Kong the four seasons are not as clear as in places like Japan.

But we still can tell when is spring, summer, autumn and winter.


But we can still can tell when is spring, summer, autumn and winter are. But we can still tell when spring, summer, autumn and winter are.

As a man I love summer, please don’t ask me why.


Going back to the question of achievement for last 4 months.


Going back to the question of achievement forwhat I said about the last 4 months. Going back to what I said about the last 4 months.

Great!


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I did actually make few things happened, like real money investment, making friends from the internet…


I did actually make few things happened, like real money investment, and making friends from the internet… I did actually make few things happen, like real money investment, and making friends from the internet…

I would call it a good start but yet far from what I expect.


I would call it a good start but yet far from what I expect. I would call it a good start but far from what I expect.

or: I would call it a good start yet far from what I expect.

So, more hard work is necessary.


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