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May 31, 2020

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Vocabulary in weather

Heavy rain causes a flood and no rain means drought. Before the advent of weather forecast, they had to see how the weather was going to be on their own. On the ground, they seriously watched the sky and saw how the wind went. That is the reason why we have a rich vocabulary in weather.


雨は降らなくても降りすぎても災いを招く。天気予報という言葉さえなかった時代、先の天気は自分で判断するしかすべはなかった。だから人々は真剣に空を眺め、風を読んだに違いない。天気にかかわらう言葉が豊かなのは、そのせいだろう。

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That is the reason why we have a rich vocabulary in weather.

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June 2, 2020

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Vocabulary in weather


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Heavy rain causes a flood and no rain means drought.


Heavy rain causes a flooding and no rain means drought (or leads to drought). Heavy rain causes flooding and no rain means drought (or leads to drought).

Heavy rain causes a flooding and no rain means drought. Heavy rain causes flooding and no rain means drought.

"Heavy rain causes a flood" sounds more like it's happening one time, where "Heavy rain causes flooding" sounds like a general rule.

Heavy rain causes a flooding, and no rain means a drought. Heavy rain causes flooding, and no rain means a drought.

The first part was grammatical, but in terms of meaning, it didn't really work because a flood is already heavy rain.

Before the advent of weather forecast, they had to see how the weather was going to be on their own.


Before the advent of weather forecast, theying, people had to see how the weather was going to be on their own. Before the advent of weather forecasting, people had to see how the weather was going to be on their own.

Before the advent of weather forecasts, theypeople had to see how the weather was going to be on their own. Before the advent of weather forecasts, people had to see how the weather was going to be on their own.

"forecasts" is plural because we are talking about the effect of many forecasts, not a specific one; I replaced "they" with "people" because "they" sounded too indirect.

Before the advent of the weather forecast, theypeople had to see how the weather was going to be on their own. Before the advent of the weather forecast, people had to see how the weather was going to be on their own.

The other suggestions also work. Here, I'm using "the" because I'm referring to the concept of a weather forecast, or weather forecasts in general. You can compare this for example to "reinventing the wheel," where we're referring to wheels in general.

On the ground, they seriously watched the sky and saw how the wind went.


On the ground, they seriously watched the sky and saw how the wind went.closely and paid attention to how the wind went (or 'to the direction of the wind') On the ground, they watched the sky closely and paid attention to how the wind went (or 'to the direction of the wind')

OStanding on the ground, they seriously watched the sky seriously and saw how the wind wentblew. Standing on the ground, they watched the sky seriously and saw how the wind blew.

It feels like "on the ground" is missing a verb so I added one. The wind "blows" instead of "goes".

On the ground, they seriously watched the sky seriously and saw how the wind wentblew. On the ground, they watched the sky seriously and saw how the wind blew.

"Seriously" generally goes after the verb. Before the verb, it's used to indicate disbelief. - She seriously read the book. (=I didn't think she would read the book.) - She read the book seriously. (=She read the book attentively.)

That is the reason why we have a rich vocabulary in weather.


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Thatis is the reason why we have a rich vocabulary inabout weather. This is the reason why we have a rich vocabulary about weather.

"This" is a bit better than "that" because it is directly referencing the previous sentence.

That is the reason why we have a rich vocabulary infor the weather. That is the reason why we have a rich vocabulary for the weather.

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