May 26, 2020
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One day I went to a town where I lived in as a child. I tried to remember about my childhood as much as possible, and came to a place where seemed to be near my house(where I used to live), but I was not confident. The town had changed a lot. The houses looked new and it did not appear to had been there for 30 years.
ある時私は、幼児期を過ごした街を通る機会に恵まれた。記憶に中の光景をたぐりよせながら、なんとかそれらしい場所まで来たが、自信がない。周囲の街並みは完全に変わってしまっていた。そこに建っていた家は３０年前からそこにあったものとはとても思えなかった。
One day, I went to a town where I lived in as a child.
I tried to remember as much about my childhood as much as possible, and came to a place whereich seemed to be near my house(where I used to live), but I was not confidentmfortable.
Unsure as to the final word here. Reading the next sentence I changed it to comfortable.
The town had changed a lot.
The houses looked new and it did not appear to hadve been there for 30 years.
May 27, 2020
Thank you!
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One day, I went to a town where I lived in as a child.
I tried to remember about my childhood as much as possible, and came to a place whereich seemed to be near my house (where I used to live), but I was not confidentn't sure.
The town had changed a lot.
The houses looked new and ithey did not appear to had been there for 30 years.
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あの。。。オチは？
May 26, 2020
これはいわゆる”英作文”と言われ、与えられた日本語の文章を英語に直すという大学受験用の問題なので、僕が考えた話じゃないんです(笑)
英語にしたらオチがないようにみえますが、日本語のだと完結した文章になっています。原文も添えたので、見てみてください。
原文の日本語も難しいので、もしかしたら原文の雰囲気が伝わらなかったのかもしれないです...
Anyway thank you so much for your corrections!
May 26, 2020
原文を読んだら、怪談話しのような雰囲気がありましたから、なにかを期待していました。でもこの文章だけでどうやって完結したかわかりません。文化的なものかもしれませんね。
May 27, 2020
そうですね。
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