Sept. 9, 2020
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I am not confident in my health, but I still hope I can live longer. I don’t ever know how to enjoy life, instead I just want to do as many things as I can. Life sucks, it’s difficult to be yourself. You have to meet somebody you don’t want to and you have to do things you don’t want to. I always think I am right, but is this world wrong? It's definitely not, so I remember an essay written by the famous writer Jia Pingwa: “I am sick”.
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I am not confident in my health, but I still hope I can live longer.
I disagree with the other correction. i think both are acceptable.
I don’t ever know how to enjoy life, i. Instead I just want to do as many things as I can.
Life sucks, i. It’s difficult to be yourself.
You have to meet somebodypeople you don’t want to and you have to do things you don’t want to.
somebody is singular. If you are referring to a specific person, your sentence would be correct. For example:
I hate working with my boss. He is somebody I don't want to meet.
I always think I am right, but is this world wrong?
Ignore my earlier correction. You are correct.
It's definitely not, so I remember an essay written by the famous writer Jia Pingwa: “I am sick”.
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I would suggest you work on using commas and periods appropriately. They can be a little bit tricky to get a handle on!
dotwriter.com/blog/16105/using-comma-period-appropriately-sentences/
Sept. 11, 2020
Thank you for your helping!
I am not confident inabout my health, but I still hope I can live longer.
I don’t ever know how to enjoy life, i. Instead, I just want to do as many things as I can.
Life sucks,; it’s difficult to be yourself.
You could also make these separate sentences: "Life sucks. It's difficult to be yourself."
You have to meet somebody you don’t want to, and you have to do things you don’t want to.
I always think I am right, but is this world wrong?
It's definitely not, so I remember an essay written by the famous writer Jia Pingwa: “I am sick”."
Periods almost always go inside the quotes in English.
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Well done! I only corrected punctuation because some of the sentences were run-on sentences (two independent clauses without enough separation). Everything else looks great!
Sept. 9, 2020
谢谢你的修改，它对我帮助很大！
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I am not confident in my health, but I still hope I can live longer. I am not confident I am not confident in my health, but I still hope I can live longer. I disagree with the other correction. i think both are acceptable. |
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I don’t ever know how to enjoy life, instead I just want to do as many things as I can. I don’t ever know how to enjoy life I don’t ever know how to enjoy life |
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Life sucks, it’s difficult to be yourself. Life sucks You could also make these separate sentences: "Life sucks. It's difficult to be yourself." Life sucks |
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You have to meet somebody you don’t want to and you have to do things you don’t want to. You have to meet somebody you don’t want to, and you have to do things you don’t want to. You have to meet somebody is singular. If you are referring to a specific person, your sentence would be correct. For example: I hate working with my boss. He is somebody I don't want to meet. |
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I always think I am right, but is this world wrong? This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Ignore my earlier correction. You are correct. |
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It's definitely not, so I remember an essay written by the famous writer Jia Pingwa: “I am sick”. It's definitely not, so I remember an essay written by the famous writer Jia Pingwa: “I am sick Periods almost always go inside the quotes in English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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