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tommy

Aug. 16, 2024

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No siblings

What do you think of the marriage between ones with no siblings? Since there is no siblings and cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away. Now, I am looking for a partner to avoid such a sad future, and giving importance to the presence of siblings. I am well aware that there are more important things to consider such as her personality, the way of spending money, and career. Her siblings might bring troubles regarding care for her parents and the inheritance. Nevertheless, it is still a important for me.
While families with one child have accounted for about 10% of all couples until 20 years ago in Japan, the ratio reached 20% recently. Considering my age, it would be difficult to have more than 2 children. In addition, whether having babies or not is up to women. Even if both of a couple hope to have them, it depends on luck.


一人っ子同士の結婚についてどう思う?私には兄弟も姉妹もいないので、両親が他界してしまうと一人になってしまう。そんな悲しい未来を避けるために結婚相手を探している。相手の性格や金銭感覚、キャリアといったもっと重要な点があることはよく理解しているが、相手に兄弟がいるかどうかを重要視している。親の介護や遺産相続といった点で相手の兄弟が面倒事を持ち込んでくるかもしれない。それでも、同世代の親戚がいない自分にとっては大事なポイントだと思う。
日本において20年前まで一人っ子の家族が占める割合は約10%であったが、最近は20%に達している。今の年齢を考えると2人以上の子どもを持つことは自分には難しいように思える。子どもを持つかどうかは女性側の判断であるし、お互い希望していても授からないこともあることを理解しなければいけない。

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No siblings

What do you think of theabout marriage between ones with no siblingsly children?

Since there is noI do not have siblings andor cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away.

Now, I am looking for a partner to avoid such a sad future, and givputting importance ton the presence of siblings.

I am well aware that there are more important things to consider such as her personality, the way ofhow she spendings money, and her career.

Her siblings might bring troubles regarding care for her parents and the inheritance.

Nevertheless, it is still a important for me.

While families with only one child have accounted for about 10% of all couples until 20 years ago in Japan, the ratio reached 20% recently.

Considering my age, it would be difficult to have more than 2 children.

In addition, whether having babies or not is up to women.

Even if both of a couple hope to have them, it depends on luck.

What do you think of the marriage between onespeople with no siblings?

'People' is more formal than 'ones', and mostly used in conversation, not writing.
Additionally, 'ones' is typically used for a specific group of people, like "we are the ones who made dinner".

Since there isI have no siblings andor cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away.

Note: I don't know where 'cousins' came from, I don't see it in the Japanese version.

I am well aware that there are more important things to consider such as her personality, the way of spending moneyhabits, and career.

"spending habits" is a common phrase to describe how a person manages their finances.

Nevertheless, it is still an important factor for me.

ALTERNATIVE: Nevertheless, it is still important for me.

Adding 'factor' conveys that having siblings adds measurable value to the relationship.

In addition, whether havingto have babies or not is up to women.

Even if both of a couple hopes to have them, it still depends on luck.

'a couple' refers to both people together.

Adding 'still' sounds more natural, but it is optional.

No siblings

What do you think of the marriage between ones(two) people with no siblings?

Since there isI have no siblings andor cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away.

Now, I am looking for a partner to avoid such a sad future, and giving importance to the presence of siblings.

I am well aware that there are more important things to consider, such as her personality, the way ofhow she spendings money, and her career.

Her siblings might bring troubles regarding care for her parents and thany possible inheritance.

Nevertheless, it is still a important for me.

While families with one child have accounted for about 10% of all couples in Japan until 20 years ago in Japan, the ratio reached 20% recently.

Considering my age, it would be difficult to have more than 2two children.

In running text, we typically spell out numbers less than 10.

In addition, whether havingto have babies or not is up tohe womean.

Even if both members of a couple hope to have them, it depends on luck.

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You could adopt several kids.

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tommy

Aug. 17, 2024

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Thank you for correcting me.

No siblings


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What do you think of the marriage between ones with no siblings?


What do you think of the marriage between ones(two) people with no siblings?

What do you think of the marriage between onespeople with no siblings?

'People' is more formal than 'ones', and mostly used in conversation, not writing. Additionally, 'ones' is typically used for a specific group of people, like "we are the ones who made dinner".

What do you think of theabout marriage between ones with no siblingsly children?

Since there is no siblings and cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away.


Since there isI have no siblings andor cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away.

Since there isI have no siblings andor cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away.

Note: I don't know where 'cousins' came from, I don't see it in the Japanese version.

Since there is noI do not have siblings andor cousins for me, I will be alone if my parents pass away.

Now, I am looking for a partner to avoid such a sad future, and giving importance to the presence of siblings.


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Now, I am looking for a partner to avoid such a sad future, and givputting importance ton the presence of siblings.

I am well aware that there are more important things to consider such as her personality, the way of spending money, and career.


I am well aware that there are more important things to consider, such as her personality, the way ofhow she spendings money, and her career.

I am well aware that there are more important things to consider such as her personality, the way of spending moneyhabits, and career.

"spending habits" is a common phrase to describe how a person manages their finances.

I am well aware that there are more important things to consider such as her personality, the way ofhow she spendings money, and her career.

Her siblings might bring troubles regarding care for her parents and the inheritance.


Her siblings might bring troubles regarding care for her parents and thany possible inheritance.

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Nevertheless, it is still a important for me.


Nevertheless, it is still a important for me.

Nevertheless, it is still an important factor for me.

ALTERNATIVE: Nevertheless, it is still important for me. Adding 'factor' conveys that having siblings adds measurable value to the relationship.

Nevertheless, it is still a important for me.

While families with one child have accounted for about 10% of all couples until 20 years ago in Japan, the ratio reached 20% recently.


While families with one child have accounted for about 10% of all couples in Japan until 20 years ago in Japan, the ratio reached 20% recently.

While families with only one child have accounted for about 10% of all couples until 20 years ago in Japan, the ratio reached 20% recently.

Considering my age, it would be difficult to have more than 2 children.


Considering my age, it would be difficult to have more than 2two children.

In running text, we typically spell out numbers less than 10.

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In addition, whether having babies or not is up to women.


In addition, whether havingto have babies or not is up tohe womean.

In addition, whether havingto have babies or not is up to women.

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Even if both of a couple hope to have them, it depends on luck.


Even if both members of a couple hope to have them, it depends on luck.

Even if both of a couple hopes to have them, it still depends on luck.

'a couple' refers to both people together. Adding 'still' sounds more natural, but it is optional.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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