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heatedcanine

April 25, 2024

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Hi, everyone, Hot Dog here again, who, for some reason, wants to say, "No news is good news!", Lol!


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皆さん、またホットドッグですが、いろいろあって、「便りがないのは良い知らせ」と言いたいと思います(笑)。

This is a kind of social experiment to prove whether the number of sentences in an entry and the corrections made relate to each other.
これは、一つの日記の文章の数と、添削してもらう数が相関するか否かの「社会実験」のようなものです。

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Hi, everyone, Hot Dog here again, who, for some reason,! I just wants to say, "No news is good news!" lol!

Rephrasing here. "for some reason" makes it seem like you don't know why you want to say it.

", Lol!

Removed to put back on the correct line, not sure how it got split.

Hi, everyone, Hot Dog here again, who, for some reason, wants to say, "No news is good news!"

", Llol!

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Langcorrect makes you choose balance, doesn't it? Often I have to struggle to correct entries to keep my ratio up!

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Kasumii

April 25, 2024

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Also, I have sacrificed myself. If you need to boost your ratio, I uploaded a longer entry xD

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It is indeed!

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heatedcanine

April 25, 2024

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Thanks, shortest! Oops, shorter!
:)

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Hi, everyone, Hhot Ddog here again, who, for some reason, wants to say, "No news is good news!” Lol!

Now unless you go by the name hot dog then you may put it as Hot Dog. If you’re talking about a regular hot dog, then lowercase is good. You didn’t need a separate part to this, ex: below this correction.

", Lol!

This part should be above.

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heatedcanine

April 25, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and explanations.
However, I have two concerns about your correction, although it's not my intention to offend you:

>Now unless you go by the name hot dog then you may put it as Hot Dog. If you’re talking about a regular hot dog, then lowercase is good. You didn’t need a separate part to this, ex: below this correction.
If you want to correct "Hot Dog" to "hot dog," it should be "a hot dog" or "hot dogs."
In that case, what is that sentence supposed to mean? What do you have in your mind for the context?
"Hi, everyone, (I have) some hot dogs here!" or something like that?

In my case, my login name is "Heated Canine (=Hot Dog)," but the restriction of LangCorrect made "Heated Canine" to be "heatedcanine." Therefore, the "Hot Dog" should be capitalaized.

>This part should be above.
This is not my fault. It's the way LangCorrect's system makes it.
And you may find how I wrote originally when you look at the one shown at the top of this article.
Thanks!

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Mafl

April 26, 2024

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No problem :) and I understand about the issue with langcorrect. I was just trying to make it clear that hot dog shouldn’t be capitalized unless it’s a proper noun.

Hi, everyone,! Hot Dog here again, who, (for some reason), wants to say, "No news is good news!

", Lol!

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Yep! The sentence amount and amount of corrections are correlated!

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heatedcanine

April 25, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comment.
However, we cannot decide not yet, because I've gotten three corrections already (in about five hours).
We'll have to observe how many corrections I will get for this entry in a couple of days.
If I will get "six" corrections or something in a few days, it would mean that there is no correlation, scientifically speaking.
Haha

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Hi, everyone, Hot Dog here again, who, for some reason, wants to say, "No news is good news!


Hi, everyone,! Hot Dog here again, who, (for some reason), wants to say, "No news is good news!

Hi, everyone, Hhot Ddog here again, who, for some reason, wants to say, "No news is good news!” Lol!

Now unless you go by the name hot dog then you may put it as Hot Dog. If you’re talking about a regular hot dog, then lowercase is good. You didn’t need a separate part to this, ex: below this correction.

Hi, everyone, Hot Dog here again, who, for some reason, wants to say, "No news is good news!"

Hi, everyone, Hot Dog here again, who, for some reason,! I just wants to say, "No news is good news!" lol!

Rephrasing here. "for some reason" makes it seem like you don't know why you want to say it.

", Lol!


", Lol!

", Lol!

This part should be above.

", Lol!

", Llol!

", Lol!

Removed to put back on the correct line, not sure how it got split.

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