yesterday
Who Do You Write for in Your Posts?
I think this is a very important question that every fledgling writer should concern himself or herself with. When I first started out on this website, I was still a beginner in German and only wanted to apply some grammar rules I recently learned. However, as my level advanced and as I started running out of topics, I came up with a new writing strategy and focused more on the reader's experience. Soon, I came to realize that the more engaging my posts were, the more corrections I got. Moreover, this new feedback was much more insightful and helpful than plain word order corrections. Now, I try to convey a certain idea in almost everything I post. I don't always get it right, and some people are never engaged while reading my posts, but I feel like I am getting better at it now. Additionally, there are a few devoted readers who like to go in depth while correcting, and I appreciate it immensely!
I think this is a very important question that every fledgling writer should concern himself or herself with.
Yes, here we have the awkward problem of him/her. I usually try to find a work around, but it isn't always possible.
In this sentence you could say:
"I think this is a very important question that every fledgling writer should be concerned with," or
"I think this is a very important question that should be of concern to every fledgling writer."
However, as my level advanced and as I started running out of topics, I came up with a new writing strategy and focused more on the reader's experience.
This sentence is fine as is. However, the incorrect correction it received suggested to me that it could be shortened a bit, with a slight shift in meaning that might be acceptable:
"However, as my level advanced, I started running out of topics, and I came up with a new writing strategy that focused more on the reader's experience."
This variation is more specific about the relationship between events, as opposed to the original, which is a list of four events. The variation with the relationships is more complex, which makes it more interesting.
Soon, I came to realize that the more engaging my posts were, the more corrections I got.
or "I realized"
Moreover, this new feedback was much more insightful and helpful than plain word order corrections.
I don't like "plain" here. (I really seem to be biased against that word in all but the most restricted uses). Here are some specific synonyms to consider as alternatives: "simple," "basic," "commonplace," "run-of-the-mill."
Additionally, there are a few devoted readers who like to go in depth whilen correcting, andwhich I appreciate it immensely!
Instead of using "while" in two consecutive sentences, you could change one "while" to "when."
Shortening up the last sentence gives it more punch.
Feedback
A fun read. Good job!
today
I'll stick with the run-of-the-mill. Big thanks for the prompt and your feedback!
I think this is a very important question that every fledgling writer should concern himself or herself with.
When I first started out on this website, I was still a beginner in German and only wanted to apply some grammar rules I recently learned.
However, as my level advanced and as I started running out of topics, .I came up with a new writing strategy and focused more on the reader's experience.
Soon, I came to realize that the more engaging my posts were, the more corrections I got.
Moreover, this newe feedback was muchs were more insightful and helpful than plain word order corrections.
Now, I try to convey a certain idea in almost everything I post.
I don't always get it right, and some people are never engaged while reading my posts, but I feel like I am getting better at it now.
Additionally, there are a few devoted readers who like to go in depth while correcting, and I appreciate it immensely!
Feedback
Amazing !
yesterday
Eh? "Feedback" is uncountable, you don't say "feedbacks"
today
Oh, you're totally right! Thanks for catching that. I guess I'm learning too 😅@gaezer
I'm really sorry for the confusion! @Lerner
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I think this is a very important question that every fledgling writer should concern himself or herself with. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I think this is a very important question that every fledgling writer should concern himself or herself with. Yes, here we have the awkward problem of him/her. I usually try to find a work around, but it isn't always possible. In this sentence you could say: "I think this is a very important question that every fledgling writer should be concerned with," or "I think this is a very important question that should be of concern to every fledgling writer." |
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When I first started out on this website, I was still a beginner in German and only wanted to apply some grammar rules I recently learned. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, as my level advanced and as I started running out of topics, I came up with a new writing strategy and focused more on the reader's experience. However, as my level advanced and as I started running out of topics However, as my level advanced and as I started running out of topics, I came up with a new writing strategy and focused more on the reader's experience. This sentence is fine as is. However, the incorrect correction it received suggested to me that it could be shortened a bit, with a slight shift in meaning that might be acceptable: "However, as my level advanced, I started running out of topics, and I came up with a new writing strategy that focused more on the reader's experience." This variation is more specific about the relationship between events, as opposed to the original, which is a list of four events. The variation with the relationships is more complex, which makes it more interesting. |
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Soon, I came to realize that the more engaging my posts were, the more corrections I got. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Soon, I came to realize that the more engaging my posts were, the more corrections I got. or "I realized" |
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Moreover, this new feedback was much more insightful and helpful than plain word order corrections. Moreover, th Moreover, this new feedback was much more insightful and helpful than plain word order corrections. I don't like "plain" here. (I really seem to be biased against that word in all but the most restricted uses). Here are some specific synonyms to consider as alternatives: "simple," "basic," "commonplace," "run-of-the-mill." |
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Now, I try to convey a certain idea in almost everything I post. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't always get it right, and some people are never engaged while reading my posts, but I feel like I am getting better at it now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Additionally, there are a few devoted readers who like to go in depth while correcting, and I appreciate it immensely! This sentence has been marked as perfect! Additionally, there are a few devoted readers who like to go in depth wh Instead of using "while" in two consecutive sentences, you could change one "while" to "when." Shortening up the last sentence gives it more punch. |
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