I realized that when you are doing some positions, you just can't thinking in an about other things, because you will fall. I realized that when you are doing some positions, you just can't think about other things, because you will fall.

I realized that when you are doing some positions/postures you just can't thinking in another thing about something else, because you will fall. I realized that when you are doing some positions/postures you just can't think about something else, because you will fall.

Thisat is my favorite thing about Yoga, because. It calms down my thoughts, forcing me just to think inabout the exercise. That is my favorite thing about Yoga. It calms down my thoughts, forcing me just to think about the exercise.

This is mMy favorite thing about Yyoga, because calm down is that it calms my thoughts, (?) .It forcinges me to just to think in the exercisabout the practice.. My favorite thing about yoga is that it calms my thoughts (?) .It forces me to just think about the practice..

So, what do you think about Yyoga? So, what do you think about yoga?

YHave you already practiced it before or not? Have you already practiced it before or not?

You alreadyDo you practiced it, or not? Do you practice it, or not?

AtOver time, I learned how to breathe, because we don't breathe right, and a. I also became a more flexible and lengthenedstrong person. Over time, I learned how to breathe, because we don't breathe right. I also became a more flexible and strong person.

Lengthened is confusing in this sentence. I thought maybe you were trying to say "strengthened" which could be a result from doing Yoga, but "strengthened" also does not work in this sentence. I changed it up some to convey that you became more flexible and strong from doing Yoga. I also broke the sentence into two separate ones. An alternate sentence that would work here would be: I learned how to breathe better, and a became a more flexible and strong person.

AtOver time, (?) I learned how to breathe, because w. We don't breathe right, and aproperly. I also became a more flexible and my muscles lengthened. Over time (?) I learned how to breathe. We don't breathe properly. I also became more flexible and my muscles lengthened.

ButHowever, when I entered the world of Yoga, I realized that it came with a life-style. However, when I entered the world of Yoga, I realized that it came with a life-style.

However sounds slightly better here. You have been saying positives of Yoga and are now describing some negatives. However works a little better than but in that context. Also enter should be past tense

But when I entered the world of Yyoga, I realized that it came with a life-style. But when I entered the world of yoga, I realized that it came with a lifestyle.

Like, influencers that sell a positive life and good vibes, and when I do Yoga, yes I seek all of this, but for me this type of person started to pasosses a toxic positivity. Like influencers that sell a positive life and good vibes, and when I do Yoga, yes I seek all of this, but for me this type of person started to posses a toxic positivity.

I think you mean possess here?

Like,There are influencers that sell a positive life and good vibes, and when I do Ypractice yoga, yes, I seek all of this, but for me thisese types of personople started to pass a toxic positivitysend/spread (?) toxic energy (?). There are influencers that sell a positive life and good vibes, and when I practice yoga, yes, I seek all of this, but for me these types of people started to send/spread (?) toxic energy (?).

So yes, Yoga is a really nice exercise that I really love, but I don't like all the packbaggage that teachers and “students” paossess. So yes, Yoga is a really nice exercise that I really love, but I don't like all the baggage that teachers and “students” possess.

Baggage and package are similar words in the dictionary, but in the context you are using, baggage is the correct word. Now I am pretty positive you mean possess here.

So Y.yoga is a really nice form of exercise that I really love, but I don't like all the package that teachers and “students” passsell. So.yoga is a really nice form of exercise that I really love, but I don't like the package that teachers and “students” sell.

I really have to say that I was caThat said, I come back to my yoga mat because the feeling of doing the positions is soooo good. That said, I come back to my yoga mat because the feeling of doing the positions is soooo good.

Took a little bit of liberty here. I think you are saying that despite not liking some things about the life-style, you still enjoy yoga. So I changed it to fit that idea.

I really have to say that I was came back to my yoga mat because the feeling of doing the positions/postures is soooo good. I really have to say that I came back to my yoga mat because the feeling of doing the positions/postures is soooo good.

yYoga class Yoga class

I started to do Yoga in 2020 atduring the pandemic. I started to do Yoga in 2020 during the pandemic.

Spelling for started. "at" is a location, the pandemic was a period of time so you would use during here.

I started to do Yproactive yoga in 2020 atduring the pandemic. I started to proactive yoga in 2020 during the pandemic.

I saw some classes online aton YouTube and fors well as on some app,s. I ended up really likeding it because I am a very anxious, so Yoga could person, and Yoga helped me with that. I saw some classes online on YouTube as well as on some apps. I ended up really liking it because I am a very anxious person, and Yoga helped me with that.

I know I just said "at" is a location and by that logic, "at", isn't wrong technically here. But a native speaker would say "on" YouTube. I also took some liberty to try and make the sentence say more closely what I think you were trying to explain.

I saw some classes online aton YouTube, and foron some app,s. I really likedwas happy about finding the classes (?) because I am a very anxious, so Y person, and yoga could help me. I saw some classes online on YouTube, and on some apps. I was happy about finding the classes (?) because I am a very anxious person, and yoga could help me.