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The Decision To Take Masteral Studies

I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT because a master's degree is highly beneficial to immigration and point-based household registration system in China. Such as if I wanna immigrate to New Zealand a master's degree can give me 5 points but a bachelor's degree only gives 3 points; if I wanna get BeiJing household registration a master's degree can give me 26points while a bachelor's degree gives 15 points.
Now I'm searching which university and major I should pursue for my future studies. I found many foreign universities only issue a degree certificate. I have no ideas whether it's useful in China, because universities of China issue both degree certificate and graduation diploma.

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The Decision To Take Masteral Studies

I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT because a master's degree is highly beneficial to immigration and point-based household registration system in China.

Such as if I wanna immigrate to New Zealand a master's degree can give me 5 points but a bachelor's degree only gives 3 points; if I wanna get BeiJing household registration a master's degree can give me 26points while a bachelor's degree gives 15 points.

Now I'm searching which university and major I should pursue for my future studies.

I found many foreign universities only issue a degree certificate.

I have no ideas whether it's useful in China, because universities of China issue both degree certificate and graduation diploma.

I found many foreign universities only issue a degree certificate.

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Jan. 4, 2026

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I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT industry because a master's degree is helpful to immigration and point-based household registration system in China.


Such as if I wanna immigrate to New Zealand a master's degree can give me 5 points but a bachelor's degree only gives 3 points; if I wanna get BeiJing household registration a master's degree can give me 26points while a bachelor's degree gives 15 points.


Such asFor example, if I wannat to immigrate to New Zealand, a master's degree can give me 5 points, but a bachelor's degree only gives me 3 points; if I wannat to get BeiJing household registration, a master's degree can give me 26 points, while a bachelor's degree gives me 15 points. For example, if I want to immigrate to New Zealand, a master's degree can give me 5 points, but a bachelor's degree only gives me 3 points; if I want to get BeiJing household registration, a master's degree can give me 26 points, while a bachelor's degree gives me 15 points.

"such as" works better in the middle of a sentence "wanna" is heard in spoken English but should not be used in writing, except when you are texting family or friends. I think of it as a way to pronounce "want to." Good use of parallel construction to keep this info aligned and easy for the reader to follow.

Such asFor example, if I wannat immigrate to New Zealand a master's degree can give me 5 points butwhereas a bachelor's degree only gives 3 points; i. If I wannat to get BeiJing household registration, a master's degree can give me 26 points while a bachelor's degree gives only 15 points. For example, if I want immigrate to New Zealand a master's degree can give me 5 points whereas a bachelor's degree only gives 3 points. If I want to get BeiJing household registration, a master's degree can give me 26 points while a bachelor's degree gives only 15 points.

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Now I'm searching which university and major I should pursue for my future studies.


Now I'm researching which university and major I should pursue for my future studies. Now I'm researching which university and major I should pursue for my future studies.

"Search" usually relates directly to "find." An internet search is often the process of looking for something specific. When someone or something is lost, search is the best word for what we do to find them. But you have to consider a variety of factors in choosing your university and program, so it is an in depth process.

Now I'm researching which university and major I should pursue for my future studies. Now I'm researching which university and major I should pursue for my future studies.

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I found many foreign universities only present a degree certificate.


I have no ideas whether it's useful in China, because universities of China present both degree certificate and graduation diploma.


The Decision To Take Masteral Studies


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The internet tells me that "Masteral" is used in the Philippines. Since you don't refer to that country anywhere in the post, I suggest using the same phrase you use in the next sentence. Another option is "to earn a master's degree."

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I found many foreign universities only issue a degree certificate.


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I have no ideas whether it's useful in China, because universities of China issue both degree certificate and graduation diploma.


I have no ideas whether ithat's useful in China, because universities ofin China issue both a degree certificate and a graduation diploma. I have no idea whether that's useful in China, because universities in China issue both a degree certificate and a graduation diploma.

The idiom is "to have no idea" You could also use the plural: "issue both degree certificates and graduation diplomas."

I have no ideas whether it's useful in China, because universities of China issue both degree certificates and graduation diplomas. I have no ideas whether it's useful in China, because universities of China issue both degree certificates and graduation diplomas.

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I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT because a master's degree is highly beneficial to immigration and point-based household registration system in China.


I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT because a master's degree is highly beneficial to immigration and the point-based household registration system in China. I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT because a master's degree is highly beneficial to immigration and the point-based household registration system in China.

This is new info to most readers, so although leaving out "the" is still fine, putting it in gives us a little more clarity.

I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT because a master's degreeit is highly beneficial toin the immigration and point-based household registration system in China. I've decided to pursue master's degree in IT because it is highly beneficial in the immigration and point-based household registration system in China.

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