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I had an year-end party with the English study group in my town last week.

Around 20 people including six English teachers attended.

We rented out an Italian restaurant for the party.

I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia so I can speak English a lot.

We talked about zodiac sign and personalities.

She said she can be feisty.

I've leant the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure the meaning, and I asked "what anime character do you think of feisty?"

She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?"

I thought maybe I understand.

Ps...there's no direct translation of "feisty" into Japanese, so my Japanese version is one of one of translations.


先週私の町の英会話サークルの忘年会がありました。

6人の先生を含めてだいたい20人くらいが出席しました。

私達は、そのパーティーのためにイタリアンレストランを貸し切りました。

私は、英語がたくさん話せるようにオーストラリアから来た先生のとなりに座りました。

私達は、星座と性格について話しました。

彼女は、「私は、ちょっとけんかっ早い時もあるよ」と言いました。

私は、以前、feistyと言う言葉を学んだとこがありましたが、その意味を確かめたかったので、「どのアニメキャラクターが喧嘩っ早いと思いますか?」と聞きました。

彼女は、アニメを見ないのでよくわからないといいましたが、別の先生が「僕のヒーローアカデミアのばくごうかつき」と言いました。

私は、あーなるほど!と思いました。

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We rented out an Italian restaurant for the party.

She said she can be feisty.

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Year-end Party

We rented out an Italian restaurant for the party.

She said she can be feisty.

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Year-end Party

I had an year-end party with the English study group in my town last week.

Around 20 people including six English teachers attended.

We rented out an Italian restaurant for the party.

I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia so I can speak English a lot.

She said she can be feisty.

I thought maybe I understand.

Ps...there's no direct translation of "feisty" into Japanese, so my Japanese version is one of one of translations.

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I had an year-end party with the English study group in my town last week.


I had an year-end party with the English study group in my town last week. I had a year-end party with the English study group in my town last week.

"An" is for words that start with vowels in the phonetic sense, and year does not

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I had an year-end party with the English study group in my town last week. I had a year-end party with the English study group in my town last week.

I had an year-end party with the English study group in my town last week. I had a year-end party with the English study group in my town last week.

I had an end-of-year-end party with the English study group in my town last week. I had an end-of-year party with the English study group in my town last week.

Really good grammar order here (I had X with the X in my town last week)!

Last week I had an year-end party with themy English study group in my town last weekmember in the town I live. Last week I had an year-end party with my English study group member in the town I live.

Around 20 people including six English teachers attended.


Around 20 people, including six English teachers, attended. Around 20 people, including six English teachers, attended.

This reads more naturally with pauses/commas around the subclause

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Around 20 people, including six English teachers, attended. Around 20 people, including six English teachers, attended.

Around 20 people, including six English teachers, attended. Around 20 people, including six English teachers, attended.

"attended" is a really good word choice. If I am being extra-picky, we might not use "attended" for something like a party. Instead, we might say "came along" or "turned up". "Attend" is a more formal word.. we "track attendance" at school, or we use it for things like work meetings.

Around 20 people attended, including six English teachers attended. Around 20 people attended, including six English teachers.

We rented out an Italian restaurant for the party.


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We rented ouserved a section at an Italian restaurant for the party. We reserved a section at an Italian restaurant for the party.

Your sentence ("rented out") suggests you booked the entire restaurant (i.e. no other customers were allowed to come to the restaurant).

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I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia so I can speak English a lot.


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I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia so I can(that) I could speak English a lot. I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia so (that) I could speak English a lot.

"I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia" is correct, but "I sat next to a teacher from Australia" is less formal and the most natural way to describe where the teacher is from.

I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia so I canould speak English a lot.a lot of English. I sat next to a teacher from Australia so I could speak a lot of English.

MORE SUCCINCTLY: I sat next to a teacher who is from Australia, so I cancould speak English a lot. MORE SUCCINCTLY: I sat next to a teacher from Australia, so could speak English a lot.

I thought maybe I understand.


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I thought maybe I understanood. I thought maybe I understood.

In English, both "think" and "understand" have to be in the past tense when you say "I thought...". An exception is when are quoting yourself (using quotation marks). For example, this is correct: I thought, "Ah, I understand!".

I thought maybe I understandfelt that I understood... maybe. I felt that I understood... maybe.

→ I felt 80% sure that I understood. → I think I got it, but I'm not absolutely certain.

I thought maybe I understand. I thought maybe I understand.

Year-end Party


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We talked about zodiac sign and personalities.


We talked about zodiac signs and personalities. We talked about zodiac signs and personalities.

We talked about zodiac signs and personalities. We talked about zodiac signs and personalities.

We talked about zodiac signs and personalities. We talked about zodiac signs and personalities.

We talked about zodiac signs and personalities. We talked about zodiac signs and personalities.

We talked about zodiac signs and personalities. We talked about zodiac signs and personalities.

We talked about zodiac signs and personalities. We talked about zodiac signs and personalities.

She said she can be feisty.


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She said she can beI would describe her as feisty. I would describe her as feisty.

I've leant the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure the meaning, and I asked "what anime character do you think of feisty?"


I've leant the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure I understood the meaning, andso I asked "what anime character do you think of as feisty?" I've leant the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure I understood the meaning, so I asked "what anime character do you think of as feisty?"

To make sure X, is to make it certain X happens. X has to be an action, so I inserted an action here Using "so" instead of "and" is better here as the final clause is because of the middle clause.

I've learnt the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure of the meaning, and I asked, "wWhat anime character do you think ofis feisty?" I've learnt the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure of the meaning, and I asked, "What anime character do you think is feisty?"

I've leantrned the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure I understood the meaning, andso I asked, "wWhat anime character do you think ofis feisty?" I've learned the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure I understood the meaning, so I asked, "What anime character do you think is feisty?"

I've lheantrd the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure the meaning, andI fully understood what it meant, so I asked "what anime character do you think ofwould you describe as feisty?" I've heard the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure I fully understood what it meant, so I asked "what anime character would you describe as feisty?"

I've leant the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure theits meaning, and I asked "what anime characters do you think ofare feisty?" I've leant the word "feisty" before, but I wanted to make sure its meaning, and I asked "what anime characters do you think are feisty?"

She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?"


She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure whatich character is feisty, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?" She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure which character is feisty, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?"

People will absolutely say "what character" here, but it's not considered correct so should be avoided in writing.

She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered, "mMaybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?" She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered, "Maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?"

She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered, "mMaybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?" She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered, "Maybe Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?"

She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feistyable to think of a character, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?" She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't able to think of a character, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?"

She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?" She doesn't watch anime, so she wasn't sure what character is feisty, but another teacher answered "maybe, Katsuki Bakugo from My Hero Academia?"

Year-end Party (108)


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Ps...there's no direct translation of "feisty" into Japanese, so my Japanese version is one of one of translations.


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PsS... there's no direct translation of "feisty" into Japanese, so my Japanese version is one of one ofmany translations. PS... there's no direct translation of "feisty" into Japanese, so my Japanese version is one of many translations.

Ps...there's no direct translation of "feisty" into Japanese, so my Japanese version is one of one of translations.my best guess/attempt. Ps...there's no direct translation of "feisty" into Japanese, so my Japanese version is my best guess/attempt.

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