Nov. 12, 2021
My Sadness Is Worth 240 Yuan
June also means farewell. A day of my last June in college, my best friend and me said goodbye to her minitor. After, we went back to school. We stayed in the bridge. She was quite sad. I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never meet each other again. I felt nothing, though. I looked down, and unfortunately, my glass fell into the lake. Thus, I had to buy another, which cost me 240 yuan. It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses.
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My Sadness Is Worth 240 Yuan
June also means farewell.
AOne day ofduring my last June in college, my best friend and meI said goodbye to her mionitor.
One day during my last June in college, my best friend and I said goodbye to her monitor.
Afterwards, we went back to school. Afterwards, we went back to school.
We stayeood ion thea bridge.
We stood on a bridge.
She was quite sad.
I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving, and maybe would never might not seet each other again.
I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving, and might not see each other again.
I felt nothing, though.
I looked down, and unfortunately, my glasses fell into the lake. I looked down, and unfortunately, my glasses fell into the lake.
眼镜 = glasses, 玻璃/杯子 = glass
Thus, I had to buy another pair, which cost me 240 yuan.
I had to buy another pair, which cost me 240 yuan.
It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses.
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Wow, that's a lot! Glasses aren't covered under insurance over there?
Nov. 13, 2021
no. we only had health insurance at that time. The insurance system is not so good here, even now we still don't have wildly coverd insurance.
My Sadness Is Worth 240 Yuan
June also means farewell.
AOne day ofduring my last June spent in college, my best friend and meI said goodbye to her minientor.
One day during my last June spent in college, my best friend and I said goodbye to her mentor.
I'm not sure if you meant to say mentor.
Afterwards, we went back to school. Afterwards, we went back to school.
We stayed inext to the bridge.
We stayed next to the bridge.
Or, We hung out on the bridge for a while.
She was quite sad.
I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never mseet each other again.
I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never see each other again.
I felt nothing, though.
I looked down, and unfortunately, my glass fell into the lake.
Thus, I had to buy another, which cost me 240 yuan.
It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses.
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Sorry to hear about the lost glass. I'm glad that you were able to replace it
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June also means farewell. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A day of my last June in college, my best friend and me said goodbye to her minitor.
I'm not sure if you meant to say mentor.
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After, we went back to school. Afterwards, we went back to school. Afterwards, we went back to school. Afterwards, we went back to school. Afterwards, we went back to school. |
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We stayed in the bridge.
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She was quite sad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never meet each other again.
I thought I should be sad as well, because we were leaving and maybe would never
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I felt nothing, though. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I looked down, and unfortunately, my glass fell into the lake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I looked down, and unfortunately, my glasses fell into the lake. I looked down, and unfortunately, my glasses fell into the lake. 眼镜 = glasses, 玻璃/杯子 = glass |
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Thus, I had to buy another, which cost me 240 yuan. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It was nearly half of my monthly living expenses. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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