Feb. 12, 2021
USJ
On July 16th, I went to USJ, which means Universal Studio Japan, with my friends from elementary school. There were entrance regulations at USJ due to COVID-19 at the time, so there was hardly anyone in the park. Maybe there are still now. That's why we could go on attractions without waiting, although we have to usually wait more than 2 hours. We probably went on about 10 rides. I think I don't want to go there when it's doing business as usual because we have to wait. Even though we all were very tired when we went home, it was a wonderful memory.
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On July 16th, I went to USJ, which means (Universal Studios Japan,) with my friends from elementary school.
On July 16th, I went to USJ (Universal Studios Japan) with my friends from elementary school.
TAt the time, there were entrance regulations at USJ due to COVID-19 at the time, so there wasere hardly anyon people in the park.
At the time, there were entrance regulations at USJ due to COVID-19, so there were hardly any people in the park.
This sounds more natural.
Maybe there are stillit's still that way now.
Maybe it's still that way now.
That's why we could go on attractions without waiting, although we have to usually waitnormally would have had to wait for more than 2 hours.
That's why we could go on attractions without waiting, although we normally would have had to wait for more than 2 hours.
The second part of the sentence is a subjunctive tense which is used for conjecture.
We probably went on about 10 rides.
I don't think I don't want to go there when it's doing business as usual because weit used to do because then we would have to wait.
I don't think I want to go there when it's doing business as it used to do because then we would have to wait.
This is tricky grammar similar to the above.
Even though we all were very tired when we went home, it was a wonderful memory.
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Great job!
Feb. 13, 2021
Thanks!
On July 16th, I went to USJ, which meansstands for Universal Studio Japan, with my friends from elementary school.
On July 16th, I went to USJ, which stands for Universal Studio Japan, with my friends from elementary school.
When using acronyms, we say "stands for" instead of "means" to describe the words for each letter. For example, we would say "USA stands for the United States of America".
Maybe there are stillIt may still be that way now.
It may still be that way now.
That's why we could go on attractions without waiting, although we have to usuallywhich we would usually have to wait more than 2 hours for.
That's why we could go on attractions without waiting, which we would usually have to wait more than 2 hours for.
I think I don't want to go there when it's doing business as usual because we would have to wait. I think I don't want to go there when it's doing business as usual because we would have to wait.
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Your grammar is excellent! The main tricky bit here is a part of English grammar called "Conditional tense."
Feb. 13, 2021
Thank you for your correct :)
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On July 16th, I went to USJ, which means Universal Studio Japan, with my friends from elementary school.
On July 16th, I went to USJ, which When using acronyms, we say "stands for" instead of "means" to describe the words for each letter. For example, we would say "USA stands for the United States of America".
On July 16th, I went to USJ |
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There were entrance regulations at USJ due to COVID-19 at the time, so there was hardly anyone in the park.
This sounds more natural. |
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Maybe there are still now.
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That's why we could go on attractions without waiting, although we have to usually wait more than 2 hours.
That's why we could go on attractions without waiting,
That's why we could go on attractions without waiting, although we The second part of the sentence is a subjunctive tense which is used for conjecture. |
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We probably went on about 10 rides. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think I don't want to go there when it's doing business as usual because we have to wait. I think I don't want to go there when it's doing business as usual because we would have to wait. I think I don't want to go there when it's doing business as usual because we would have to wait.
I don't think I This is tricky grammar similar to the above. |
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Even though we all were very tired when we went home, it was a wonderful memory. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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