The CPU Cooler The CPU Cooler

This sounds more natural for a title in the US.

My PC suddenly started to shutting down constantly yesterday. My PC suddenly started shutting down constantly yesterday.

My PC suddenly started to shutting down constantly yesterday. My PC suddenly started shutting down constantly yesterday.

This means that it doewasn’t cooling the CPU. This means that it wasn’t cooling the CPU.

This means that it doeisn’t cooling the CPU. This means that it isn’t cooling the CPU.

This sounds more natural in the US.

This meanst that it doewasn’'t cooling the CPU. This meant that it wasn't cooling the CPU.

The CPU fan spins, but the air coming from it is not warm at all. The CPU fan spins, but the air coming from it is not warm at all.

The CPU fan spins but the air coming fromout of it iwas not warmcool enough at all. The CPU fan spins but the air coming out of it was not cool enough at all.

When you use 'not warm at all' it usually means something is a cool or cold tempurature.

The CPU fan spins but air coming from it is not warm at alstill cool. The CPU fan spins but air coming from it is still cool.

Unlike Japanese, in English we tend to use less negative phrasing.

The CPU fan spins butwas spinning but the air coming from it iwas not warm at all. The CPU fan was spinning but the air coming from it was not warm at all.

I checked it's temperature and found out that the CPU was damnextremely hot even when the PC was not active. I checked it's temperature and found out that the CPU was extremely hot even when the PC was not active.

"Damn" is a bit conversational and doesn't really fit here.

I checked its temperature and found out that the CPU was really damn hot even when the PC was not active. I checked its temperature and found out that the CPU was really damn hot even when the PC was not active.

Using 'really' or 'so' with 'damn' is more common in my opinion.

I checked its temperature and found out that the CPU was damn hot even when the PC was not activerunning. I checked its temperature and found out that the CPU was damn hot even when the PC was not running.

In US English, we often describe a computer as running or not running.

I checked its temperature and found out that the CPU was damnreally hot even when the PC was not active. I checked its temperature and found out that the CPU was really hot even when the PC was not active.

This ishappened in the worst timing. This happened in the worst timing.

There awere a lot of things I wanted to do during the upcoming holidays. There were a lot of things I wanted to do during the upcoming holidays.

There awere a lot of things that I wanted to do during the upcoming holidays. There were a lot of things that I wanted to do during the upcoming holidays.

There are a lot of things I want to do during the upcoming holidays., There are a lot of things I want to do during the upcoming holidays,

..., but now I can’t do any of them without a PC. ..., but now I can’t do any of them without a PC.

Connect this to the previous sentence like this.

And I can’t do any of them without a PC And I can’t do any of them without a PC

I can’t do any of them without a PC. I can’t do any of them without a PC.

but I can’t do any of them without a PC. but I can’t do any of them without a PC.

Of course, it’s already affecting my content creator activity, too. Of course, it’s already affecting my content creator activity, too.

Of course, it’s already started affecting my content creator activity too. Of course, it’s already started affecting my content creator activity too.

You can’t get a new part immediately even if you are an Amazon Prime member during this season/(time of the year). You can’t get a new part immediately even if you are an Amazon Prime member during this season/(time of the year).

You can’t get any new parts immediately even if you awere an Amazon Prime member in this season. You can’t get any new parts immediately even if you were an Amazon Prime member this season.

YDuring this time, you can’t get a new part immediately even if you are an Amazon Prime member in this season. During this time, you can’t get a new part immediately even if you are an Amazon Prime member.

This sounds more natural in the US.

YAt these time of year you can’t get a new part immediatequickly even if you are an Amazon Prime member in this season. At these time of year you can’t get a new part quickly even if you are an Amazon Prime member.

I am glad that I didn’t sell it for small moneyto get some extra cash. I am glad that I didn’t sell it to get some extra cash.

I am glad that I didn’t sell it for smallome money. I am glad that I didn’t sell it for some money.

I am glad that I didn’t sell it for a small amount of money. I am glad that I didn’t sell it for a small amount of money.

This sounds more natural in the US. そうですね！

I am glad that I didn’t sell it for a small amount of money. I am glad that I didn’t sell it for a small amount of money.

It has a better PC case, too. It has a better PC case, too.

We always put a comma (,) before using "too."

It has a better PC case, too. It has a better PC case, too.