Jan. 18, 2022
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Today, I made first baby meal for Ha-min. It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-young baby. However, I think I've been taking mom-in-law's efforts for granted. When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed but I knew I already should have done it before she said so. It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min ate it well. I think I should appreciate my mom-in-law more.
It's a shame to say, but until this time, my momther-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby...) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-young baby.
“Mom-in-law” isn’t in usage so far as I know. “Mother-in-law” is the accepted expression.
When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed, but I knew I already should have done it before she said so.
I think “before she said so” is implied in “before” here, so no need to spell it out.
It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min ate it wellenjoyed it.
“Ate it well” isn’t an expression. I wasn’t sure quite what you meant, but I’m guessing “enjoyed it” comes close.
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Overall, pretty fluid. Usage takes time, and usually some trial and error, but you’ve got the fundamentals. Nice work.
Jan. 20, 2022
thank you for the specific and sincere comment :)
ninth journal
Today, I made first made a baby meal for Ha-min.
It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-very young baby.
Jan. 20, 2022
thank you :)
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Today, I made first baby meal for Ha-min. Today, I |
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It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my too-young baby. It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mom-in-law had been making Ha-min's meal instead of me since I was not confident in cooking at all (especially, for a baby..) I had been quite afraid of feeding what I made to my It's a shame to say, but until this time, my mo “Mom-in-law” isn’t in usage so far as I know. “Mother-in-law” is the accepted expression. |
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However, I think I've been taking mom-in-law's efforts for granted. |
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When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed but I knew I already should have done it before she said so. When she told me to try making it by myself this time, I was a little embarrassed, but I knew I already should have done it before I think “before she said so” is implied in “before” here, so no need to spell it out. |
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It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min ate it well. It took hours making it and fortunately, Ha-min “Ate it well” isn’t an expression. I wasn’t sure quite what you meant, but I’m guessing “enjoyed it” comes close. |
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I think I should appreciate my mom-in-law more. |
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