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sachisachi

March 23, 2024

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Nintendo World (65)

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

70 minutes were too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.

When we got in the ride we said "Here we go!" raising our arms.

However, the time we were in the ride was only 5 minutes.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.


私は家族とユニバに行きました。

息子は任天堂ワールドに行きたかったので、整理券を入手する必要がありました。

ユニバーサルスタジオのアプリをダウンロードして整理券を入手しました。

任天堂ワールドに入場する時「Here we go」がここのキャッチフレーズですよ、とスタッフが教えてくれました。

まず最初に「ヨッシーアドベンチャー」と言うアトラクションに乗るために70分列に並んで待ちました。

70分は私には長すぎました。でも息子はずっとわくわくしていました。

でも乗り物に乗ってる時間はたったの5分でした。

乗るときにキャッチフレーズ「Here we go」と腕を上げて言いました。

マリオのキーチェーンをお土産に買いました。

お金を払った後でレジの人が「楽しんでね」と言って、その後一緒に「Here we go!」と言いましたが、あまり元気よく言う気力がありませんでした。

ごめんなさい。次は頑張るよ。

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Nintendo World (65)

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtainbuy the timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtainedbought the timed tickets.

When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

At first, we waited for the attractionin line for the Yoshi adventure to ride, for 70 minutes in the line.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whileduring the waiting time.

When we got in the ride we said "Here we go!"

rRaising our arms.

However, the time we were in the ride was only 5 minutes.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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sachisachi

April 3, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!

Nintendo World (65)

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

When we entered the world, the staff told us that theaught us a catchphrase here is, "Here we go!"

At first, we waited for the a70 minutes in the line for the attraction , 'Yoshi a's Adventure' to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

When we got ion the ride we said "Here we go!"

raising our arms.

However, the time we were ion the ride was only 5 minutes.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy theyour time" and then, we said together "Here we go!

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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mike1

March 26, 2024

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I really, REALLY want to go to Nintendo World at USJ. I owe it to my 12 year old self. lol

I think I would spend a lot of money at the shop.

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sachisachi

March 27, 2024

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Thank you for your correction!
Yes, you would definitely enjoy Nintendo World!

Nintendo World

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

When we entered the wNintendo World, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

At first, we waited forin line for 70 minutes to ride the attraction Yoshi a's Adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

I'm not sure if the name of the attraction actually has the s in it, but typical English grammar would include the s

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

When we got ion the ride we said "Here we go!"

raising our arms.

However, the time we were ionly on the ride was onlyfor 5 minutes.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said, "Enjoy the time!" and then, we said together, "Here we go!

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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sachisachi

March 24, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

Nintendo World

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

When we entered the wNintendo World, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

At first, we waited forin line for 70 minutes to ride the attraction Yoshi aAdventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

When we got ion the ride, we raised our arms and said "Here we go!"

raising our arms.

However, the time we were in the ride was only 5 minutes long.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy theyour time!" and then, we said together "Here we go!

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

Feedback

It's very understandable that you felt tired. When I went to Universal Studios Japan, I enjoyed it, but the lines were very long. We often waited for over 70 minutes to go on a ride. It made me feel tired sometimes too.

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sachisachi

March 24, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!
Sounds like you are patient, but maybe I'm not that patient lol. But I feel like going again😅

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timedget tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timedbought the tickets.

When we entered the wNintendo World, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the linein line for 70 minutes to ride the Yoshi adventure attraction.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.

As someone explained previously, "70 minutes was too long" is short for "Waiting 70 minutes was too long"

When we got ion the ride we raised our arms and said "Here we go!"

raising our arms.

However, the time we were in the ride waswe spent only 5 minutes on the ride.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy theyour time" and then, we said together "Here we go!

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sachisachi

March 24, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

Nintendo World

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timnumbered tickets (with our place in line).

I wasn't sure how to translate 整理券 - perhaps something like this works.

When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

Although it's called Nintendo World, it sounds a bit strange to say "entered the world" here. You could also say, "entered Nintendo World."

At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line70 minutes in the Yoshi adventure attraction.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.

So, I completely understand why you said "were," because minutes is plural. But... in this case, "was" sounds much more natural.
It's kinda like saying, "(Waiting) 70 minutes was too long," or, "(The concept of) 70 minutes was too long."

When we got inon/to the ride we said "Here we go!"

raising our arms.

However, the time we were ion the ride was only 5 minutes.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy theyour time" and then, we said together "Here we go!

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

Feedback

It's perfectly reasonable to feel tired after a long wait in a line! ^^

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sachisachi

March 24, 2024

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Thank you so much for your correction!
Numbered tickets! Thank you for teaching. I'll remember this phrase.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtainbuy/get timed tickets.

"Obtain" isn't exactly wrong, but using buy or get for tickets is more appropriate.

I am not sure if "timed tickets" is different in the case of Nintendo World. If not, just use "tickets"

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtainedbought/got the timed tickets.

same as above

At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

70 minutes were too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!

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sachisachi

March 24, 2024

1

Thank you so much for your correction!

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.


I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtainedbought/got the timed tickets.

same as above

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timnumbered tickets (with our place in line).

I wasn't sure how to translate 整理券 - perhaps something like this works.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timedbought the tickets.

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I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtainedbought the timed tickets.

When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"


When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

Although it's called Nintendo World, it sounds a bit strange to say "entered the world" here. You could also say, "entered Nintendo World."

When we entered the wNintendo World, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

When we entered the wNintendo World, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

When we entered the wNintendo World, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

When we entered the world, the staff told us that theaught us a catchphrase here is, "Here we go!"

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At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.


At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line70 minutes in the Yoshi adventure attraction.

At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the linein line for 70 minutes to ride the Yoshi adventure attraction.

At first, we waited forin line for 70 minutes to ride the attraction Yoshi aAdventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

At first, we waited forin line for 70 minutes to ride the attraction Yoshi a's Adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

I'm not sure if the name of the attraction actually has the s in it, but typical English grammar would include the s

At first, we waited for the a70 minutes in the line for the attraction , 'Yoshi a's Adventure' to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

At first, we waited for the attractionin line for the Yoshi adventure to ride, for 70 minutes in the line.

70 minutes were too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.


70 minutes were too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.

So, I completely understand why you said "were," because minutes is plural. But... in this case, "was" sounds much more natural. It's kinda like saying, "(Waiting) 70 minutes was too long," or, "(The concept of) 70 minutes was too long."

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.

As someone explained previously, "70 minutes was too long" is short for "Waiting 70 minutes was too long"

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whiole time.

70 minutes wereas too long for me, but my son looked so excited the whileduring the waiting time.

When we got in the ride we said "Here we go!"


When we got inon/to the ride we said "Here we go!"

When we got ion the ride we raised our arms and said "Here we go!"

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rRaising our arms.

However, the time we were in the ride was only 5 minutes.


However, the time we were ion the ride was only 5 minutes.

However, the time we were in the ride waswe spent only 5 minutes on the ride.

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However, the time we were ionly on the ride was onlyfor 5 minutes.

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I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.


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After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!


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My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.


My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtainbuy/get timed tickets.

"Obtain" isn't exactly wrong, but using buy or get for tickets is more appropriate. I am not sure if "timed tickets" is different in the case of Nintendo World. If not, just use "tickets"

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I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.


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