Nov. 11, 2020
Nightcrawler
Last evening, I watched a movie, "Nightcrawler". Its story is a man, who was a petty criminal, starts to film a scene of a crime or accident, and sell it to a TV station, and his behavior is escalating more and more to catch a radical video.
He may be a psychopath, so he doesn't imagine what others are feeling, and does illegal, immoral things without hesitation. The only thing I can respect for him is that he is hardworking and have diligence, but it works in a negative way.
The end of the story was also disgusting. However, I thought it is well-made, and the acting is also good, so this is a good movie.
Nightcrawler
Last eveningnight, I watched a movie, "Nightcrawler".
Evening isn't wrong, but night is more commonly used, and evening sounds a bit weird.
Its story is about a man, who was a petty criminal,. He starts to film athe scenes of a crimes or accidents, and sells it to a TV station, and h. His behavior isthen escalatinges more and more to catch a radicin order to catch more sensational video.
Biggest change is using more sentences, because this idea is a bit too long for just one in English.
I changed radical to sensational, because I think sensational, or a description for things that are going to have a large impact on public excitement sounds more accurate to what you want to describe.
He may be a psychopath, so he doesn't imaginecare about what others are feeling, and does illegal, and immoral things without hesitation.
Psychopath is someone who doesn't care about their actions' effects on others, but they might be able to imagine it if they tried, so I don't think imagine is accurate.
The only thing I can respect for himhim for, is that he is hardworking and have diligencet, but it works in a negative way.
The end of the story was also disgusting.
However, I thought it is well-made, and the acting is also good, so this is a good movie.
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Very clear and easy to read. I think sometimes you tend to fit too many ideas into one sentence, but it's not a really big problem because you're still very understandable.
Nov. 12, 2020
Thank you so much for your helpful correction!
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Nightcrawler This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Last evening, I watched a movie, "Nightcrawler". Last Evening isn't wrong, but night is more commonly used, and evening sounds a bit weird. |
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Its story is a man, who was a petty criminal, starts to film a scene of a crime or accident, and sell it to a TV station, and his behavior is escalating more and more to catch a radical video. Its story is about a man, who was a petty criminal Biggest change is using more sentences, because this idea is a bit too long for just one in English. I changed radical to sensational, because I think sensational, or a description for things that are going to have a large impact on public excitement sounds more accurate to what you want to describe. |
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He may be a psychopath, so he doesn't imagine what others are feeling, and does illegal, immoral things without hesitation. He may be a psychopath, so he doesn't Psychopath is someone who doesn't care about their actions' effects on others, but they might be able to imagine it if they tried, so I don't think imagine is accurate. |
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The only thing I can respect for him is that he is hardworking and have diligence, but it works in a negative way. The only thing I can respect |
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The end of the story was also disgusting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, I thought it is well-made, and the acting is also good, so this is a good movie. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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