Oct. 17, 2024
Night Mare (94)
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I just remembered it was really scary.
In the dream, I was trying to scream like "HELP", but I barely made a little bit of voice.
I was trying making a voice over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voice.
And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I work up.
I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.
I was like "thanks God, because of my cat I'm released from the scary dream."
I don't want to have a night mare any more
昨夜とても怖い夢を見ました。
実は、どんな夢だったかよく覚えていませんが、とても怖かったことだけ覚えています。
夢の中で、私は助けて！と叫ぼうとしましたが、かすかな小さな声しかでませんでした。
何度も何度も声を出そうとしましたが、全然大きな声が出ませんでした。
そして、突然猫の鳴き声が聞こえて、目が覚めました。
私は夢を見ていたことに気がついて、そして私の猫がベットの横で鳴いていました。
私は「あー助かった！猫のおかげで怖い夢から解放された」とほっとしました。
もう怖い夢は見たくないです。
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was likeabout, but I just remembered it wasbeing really scary.
In the dream, I was trying to scream like "HELP", but I barely made a little bit of vnoicse.
I was trying making a voiceyell over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voice.
And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I worke up.
I was like "thanks God, because of my cat I'm released woke up from the scary dream."
I don't want to have a night mare any more.
Oct. 23, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
A Night Mmare (94)
Often "night mare" is spelled as ONE WORD. (See https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/nightmare. or https://www.collinsdictionary.com/dictionary/english/nightmare )
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I justhe contents clearly, but remembered it was really scary.
NOTE: The 2nd "I" can be safely deleted.
In the ardream, I was trying to scream like "HELPelp!", but I barely made a little bit of voicemy voice was mute/muffled.
I was trying making a voiceto scream over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voicmy voice had no volume.
And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I(I ) worke up.
SUGGESTION: Delete the 2nd "I" - it is not needed.
I then realized I hadit was merely a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.
I was likethought to myself, "tThanks God, because of my cat I'm was released from the scary dreamat nightmare."
Needless to say, I don't want to have a nightny maore any morenightmares.
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Hope you sleep well.
Oct. 23, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I just remembered it was really scary.
I recommended having both clauses use the same tense (the present) instead of having the first one in the present and the second in the past.
In the dream, I was trying to scream like "HELP", but I could barely madke a little bit of vnoicse.
I was trying making a voice over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voicetried again and again, but I couldn't do it.
AndOut of nowhere, I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I worke up.
Placing the clause "out of nowhere" at the beginning of your sentence helps to connect it to the previous sentence.
I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.
I was like "thanks God, because of my cat I'm freleasede from the scary dream."
I don't want to have any more night mare any mores!
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Overall, your writing is clear and easy for me to understand. I made a few small suggestions.
Oct. 20, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Night Mmare
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I just remembered it was really scary.
In the dream, I was trying to scream like "HELP", but I barelyfor help, but all I could madke a little bit of voicewas a small sound.
I was trying making a voiceto scream over and over again, but I couldn't make any loud voicesound.
And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I worke up.
I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.
I was like, "thanks God, because of my cat I'm released from theis scary dream."
I don't want to have any more night mare any mores.
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That sounds so scary! I wonder why you were screaming for help.
When you have nightmares, do you know if you make any loud sounds or yell in your sleep? Once in a while, when I have nightmares, I unconsciously yell in my sleep... Sometimes I realize I'm yelling, and it wakes me up. 😅
Oct. 17, 2024
I think I was actually making sounds in my sleep. I guess that's why my cat came and meowing....because the cat always meows when I sneeze. She doesn't like weird sounds😅 It's very interesting, isn't it?
Oct. 17, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Night Mmare
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was likeabout, but I just remembered it was really scary.
"really scary" is fine.
An alternative word choice:
"terrifying"
In the dream, I was trying to scream something like "HELP", but I could barely madke a little bit of voicesound.
I was trying making a voiceto shout over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voice barely make a whisper.
And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I worke up.
I realized I had a dream, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.
I was like "thanks God, because of my cat I'm released from theis scary dream."
I don'tnever want to have another night mare any more.
Or:
"I never want to have a nightmare ever again"
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怖いね
１０月は「spooky month」です！
Oct. 17, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections! Spooky month!? because of Halloween? I love Halloween, but I don't want a spooky dream😅
Oct. 17, 2024
Yes, because of Halloween!
You sometime see October referred to as "spooky month" or "spooky season". Because, probably due to capitalism, we stretch a single-day holiday out over a whole month :D
Examples from some recent news article:-
"Spooky season is officially upon us, and there's no better way to celebrate than with scary movies every night of the month."
"Tomorrow marks the start of another October — "spooky month," if you will — and naturally, that got me thinking about some of the most memorable horror games I've played over the years."
Night Mmare
I had a night mare last night.
Actually, I don't really remember what the dream was like, but I just remembered it was really scary.
In the dream, I was trying to scream like "HELP", but I was barely made a little bit of voice.able to speak. (or I barely made any sound.)
I was trying making ato use my voice over and over, but I couldn't make any loud voicesound.
And I heard a cat meowing out of nowhere, and then I worke up.
I realized I had awas dreaming, and my cat was meowing next to my bed.
I was like "thanks God, because of my cat I'mve been released from theat scary dream."
I don't want to have a night mares any more.
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Good job! I'm glad your cat was able to wake you up from your nightmare.
Oct. 17, 2024
Thank you so much for your corrections!
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