Dec. 18, 2021
Nidalee
My superhero's name is Nidalee. She is an ordinary woman, but what makes her special is that she can turn into a tiger.
She is a very withdrawn person, her parents died at the age of seven. She went to the forest and started living with animals. She discovered how she could turn into a tiger. Everyone knows that Nidalee lives in the forest and that is why they declared her a witch. She hates people and sometimes knows how to scare them at night. She has brown hair and brown eyes, her clothes are made of forest things.
Nidalee would give everything if she could hear the voice of her parents once again, she firmly believes that this will come true ...
Nidalee
My superhero's name is Nidalee.
She is an ordinary woman, but what makes her special is that she can turn into a tiger.
She is's been a very withdrawn person, ever since her parents died at the age ofwhen she was only seven.
1. If you want to connect the second part as the reason for the first, this phrasing might be better.
2. Better to specify that *she* was seven, not her parents! heh
She went to the forest and started living with animals.
She discovered how she could turn into a tiger.
Everyone knowsew that Nidalee livesd in the forest, and that is why they declared her a witch.
She hates people and sometimes knows how to scare them at night sometimes.
"sometimes knows" makes it sound like she loses the knowledge occasionally, lol
She has brown hair and brown eyes, her clothes are made of forest thingsthings from the forest.
Nidalee would give everything if she could to hear the voice of her parents once again, and she firmly believes that thisone day, this wish will come true ...
Added some words for flow.
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Well-written post! Another great OC (original character) by you! :)
Dec. 19, 2021
She hates people and sometimes knows how to scare them at night sometimes.
You are right, lol
Nidalee
My superhero's name is Nidalee.
She is an ordinary woman, but what makes her special is that she can turn into a tiger.
She is a very withdrawn person, h. Her parents died at the age ofwhen she was seven.
She went to the forest and started living with animals.
She discovered howthat she could turn into a tiger.
Everyone knows that Nidalee lives in the forest, and that is whyso they declared her a witch.
She hates people, and sometimeshe knows how to scare them at night.
She has brown hair and brown eyes, and her clothes are made of forest thingsthings from the forest.
Nidalee would give everything if she could hear the voice of her parents' voices once again, s. She firmly believes that ther wish will come true ...
Dec. 19, 2021
Thank you for taking your time.
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