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alexwong2164

March 11, 2023

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nice worker

I am a decent employee

Two days ago I was having a small accident outside of my home.

I fell down on the stair and injured my arm.

The wound area looks terrible but not really serious.

So, I still go to work yesterday.

But when all my colleagues saw my arm.

They all say I should go to see a doctor and rest at room.

In fact that is the right thing to do.

So, today I go to see a doctor and tell him about what happened.

At last when I ask him can I have a day rest at home?

He give me 4 rest days!

But I told him 2 day is enough.

I am sad now!

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I am a decent employee

Two days ago, I was havinghad a small accident outside of my homuse.

I fell down on the stairs and injured my arm.

The wound area looks terrible but it's not really (that) serious.

So, I still gowent to work yesterday.

But when all my colleagues saw my arm, they all said I should go see a doctor and rest.

Combining this sentence with the one after it

In fact, that is the right thing to do.

So, today I gowent to see a doctor and tellold him about what happened.

At last when I asked him, can I have a day of rest at home?

He giave me 4 rest days!

But I told him 2 day is was enough.

I am sad now!

nice I am a hardworker

I am a decent employee.

Two days ago I was havinghad a small accident outside of my homuse.

I fell down on the stairs and injured my arm.

The wound area looks terrible but noy painful, but it isn't really serious.

So, I still gowent to work yesterday.

But when all my colleagues saw my arm.,

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Tthey all sayid I should go to see a doctor and resttake at roomest.

In fact that iAt the time it was the right thing to do.

So, tToday I gowent to see athe doctor and tellold him abouwhat whatd happened.

At last whenthe end of the appointment, I asked him can I have a day rest at home?whether I could stay at home and rest.

He give me 4said yes and gave me a 4 day rest daysslip!

But I told him 2 day isthat 2 days was more than enough.

I am sad now!

I don't think you should write this as your conclusion as you were the one who said to minimise the number of dates. If you knew it would make you sad why do it? It could get the readers confused.

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I am a decent employee.

Two days ago, I was havinghad a small accident outside of my homuse.

I fell down on the stairs and injured my arm.

The wound area looks terrible but nothing really serious.

So, I still gowent to work yesterday.

But when all of my colleagues saw my arm.

They all saysaid I should go to see a doctor and rest at roomget some rest.

So, today I gowent to see a doctor and tellold him about what happened.

At last when, I asked him can I have a day to rest at home?

He giave me 4 rest days!

But I told him 2 days is enough.

nice worker


nice I am a hardworker

I am a decent employee


I am a decent employee.

I am a decent employee.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Two days ago I was having a small accident outside of my home.


Two days ago, I was havinghad a small accident outside of my homuse.

Two days ago I was havinghad a small accident outside of my homuse.

Two days ago, I was havinghad a small accident outside of my homuse.

I fell down on the stair and injured my arm.


I fell down on the stairs and injured my arm.

I fell down on the stairs and injured my arm.

I fell down on the stairs and injured my arm.

The wound area looks terrible but not really serious.


The wound area looks terrible but nothing really serious.

The wound area looks terrible but noy painful, but it isn't really serious.

The wound area looks terrible but it's not really (that) serious.

So, I still go to work yesterday.


So, I still gowent to work yesterday.

So, I still gowent to work yesterday.

So, I still gowent to work yesterday.

But when all my colleagues saw my arm.


But when all of my colleagues saw my arm.

But when all my colleagues saw my arm.,

It's not a finished sentence so you can't add a ".".

But when all my colleagues saw my arm, they all said I should go see a doctor and rest.

Combining this sentence with the one after it

They all say I should go to see a doctor and rest at room.


They all saysaid I should go to see a doctor and rest at roomget some rest.

Tthey all sayid I should go to see a doctor and resttake at roomest.

In fact that is the right thing to do.


In fact that iAt the time it was the right thing to do.

In fact, that is the right thing to do.

So, today I go to see a doctor and tell him about what happened.


So, today I gowent to see a doctor and tellold him about what happened.

So, tToday I gowent to see athe doctor and tellold him abouwhat whatd happened.

So, today I gowent to see a doctor and tellold him about what happened.

At last when I ask him can I have a day rest at home?


At last when, I asked him can I have a day to rest at home?

At last whenthe end of the appointment, I asked him can I have a day rest at home?whether I could stay at home and rest.

At last when I asked him, can I have a day of rest at home?

He give me 4 rest days!


He giave me 4 rest days!

He give me 4said yes and gave me a 4 day rest daysslip!

He giave me 4 rest days!

But I told him 2 day is enough.


But I told him 2 days is enough.

But I told him 2 day isthat 2 days was more than enough.

But I told him 2 day is was enough.

I am sad now!


I am sad now!

I don't think you should write this as your conclusion as you were the one who said to minimise the number of dates. If you knew it would make you sad why do it? It could get the readers confused.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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